Yeah. It was quite good.

That poor women!

This is a truly wonderful story. I love the way you handled the main character POV, I think you manage to convey perfectly her insane way of thinking and how she crept further and further into madness. It was very interesting, and felt incredibly real. And I also liked how you portrayed America and Canada’s relationship, how America kept worrying for Canada and Canada trying to calm him down, even if he was the one in danger (well, not really. But America probably didn’t know that before finding him). Good job, and thank you for writing this! (and sorry for my English, it’s not my first language)

This is really Good, I love how you portrayed America and Canada

Huh. Very interesting. I liked it.

Mattie, I hope he's okay. :) I think he'll be okay though... XD I love the fact that the others immediately noticed he was missing, and well, indicating that he's not entirely invisible...

nice one. I'd love to read more about that AU

Wow this is really good, especially how you wrote the stalker lady.

I never thought i'd feel sorry for someone who tried to split up the N/A Twins. You've changed that. This is a very beautiful and Heart-Wrenching story. Could you write a sequel where the twins help her find someone else(human)?

Yeesh this girl scared me...and reminded me of Belarus...and yet I pity her...well done, it's hard for me to despise and pity at the same time...

Wonderful short story. You portrayed this poor woman wonderfully. I hope she gets some professional help.

You did do a good job writing her. I felt more sorry for her then Matthew.

Alfred. Y U NO LOVE YANDERE LADY?

I read this story on a different website and was super happy when I found it on here. You did a very good job withd the characters and made the story realistic

Hmm... She went from Woobie to Ax Crazy. The development of stalkers, in this case.

Canada is so in-character with his feelings of sympathy towards the crazy-stalker. Typical peacekeeper (**GOCANADA!**)

Either way, oblivious!America doesn't notice blatant warning signs, but this wasn't his fault. (**GOHEROIC!AMERICA!**)

Fridge Logic/Brilliance/Horror: Canada's statement about the stalker threatening with a knife being not enough to harm him vaguely alludes to this nation status (if a not a Hetalia fan, this is a fairly ominous statement in general). On top of that, let's say she does attack him... What a different ending to take. Then again, she does start to strangle him... What happens to Canada the country, if Canada the representative dies? There's some horror for you if the story twists that direction.

I have to say, this story is quite impressive. You portrayed the female character quite skillfully and believably. I really enjoyed reading the story, and applaud you for your skills.