A good story, I found myself lost as well.
I listened to "The Civil Wars" play "Talking In Your Sleep" When i read. it's felt very appropriate.

awwwwwwww, fantastic job!

lol

So very cute :3

Holy crap i love! Their chemistry is fantastic, you capture Spock's personality amazingly (from what i know anyway) and their little sexual encounter was fantabulous :D 3 :)

Hot and sweet. Very well done!

lovely :)

love love love! i am so all about the tucked in sheets - and its totally a deal breaker!

Hm, for someone rather squeamish about personal space, I'm strangely okay with sharing bedspace with friends and co-workers. I used to be anal about HOW my bed was arranged-must block spiders from crawling up the bottom-but I'm much better now...Though my feet still have to be covered and tucked in.

I freaking love this story. I laughed out loud in several places, mostly because I have to have the sheets tight myself. I get mocked for it all the time by my sisters and husband. They can't figure out why I make the bed before I get into it. Love this! Great Kirk, great Spock. Excellent characterization, and loved the little tie-in at the end. You did a great job with the crew's voices. Overall one of the funnest fics I've read in a while. Thanks!

This was delightful! I love the slow build up and the fulfillment of their desires.

It was funny, insightful, sweet. I loved the fact that it was Spock's POV. That made it unfold mysteriously and wonderfully!

Thanks for sharing this!

aww too cut ei loved it great job

Um, I just have to say that I completely agree with Kirk and Spock on this one- crisp sheets are the best. Especially if they're brand new clean sheets.

This story made me smile! It was cute and sweet and I loved it. Thank you for writing it!