It was just perfect; the way you gave them both life, their characters, their lust. It's not an ordinary plot and that was what I enjoyed the most. You did an amazing job. Well done!

I really loved this - mostly. The tone was haunting and the plot was interesting, and Lily and Teddy were lovely as usual, but I feel like the end happened a bit too fast. I would go so far to say that it felt a little rushed.
That being said, it was very well-written, and I did like it. This is the first time I've found any kind of flaw in your writing, and that says a lot.

I'm just in love with your story. You have NO idea of how beautiful it is, have you? It made me see a different Lily from what my mind is used to see her as.(and that's a difficult thing to do, because i just don't accept another Lily than mine) From now on I'll see her in a different way. You have an outstanding righting and the word choices were SO great. I read it with huge pleasure and shared with some friends of mine (I indicated you to our private Library, if you don't mind, of course! I said your name, the name of the fanfic, the link, everything!). THANK YOU SO DAMN MUCH for sharing this AMAZING story, I'm deeply enchanted with it and felt like it was my obligation to leave you a decent review. I hope I succeeded in my task, lol!

Kisses, sweetheart! Keep on righting, you are awesome in what you do! :]

Ps: sorry if I wrote something wrong, I'm from Brazil and still in learning process, haha!

I think you are talented. This story really captivated me (as have two or three other lily/teddy fanfics of yours that I just read before this, so consider this a multiple review). It really just grabbed me and didn't let me go. Also, I love how you've woven your interest in literature and poetry, sometimes subtile, sometimes not so much, into the stories.

Though I really like fanfiction, most stories in the genre wouldn't be considered as 'literary valuable' (whatever that means). In your stories, however, something of the kind shines through. So, if you're not already doing it, I'd suggest you try out writing your own fiction sometime. Till then, I'll enjoy your other stories!

This was just...fantastic. Powerful and beautifully written and I loved every moment of reading it.

I really, really like your writing style. It's poetic.

'he was happy that he was not afraid of being a coward'

Favorited.

You had an interesting twist on Teddy/Lily, that they slept together and then she left him. I'm happy that they got back together at the end, though! I quite liked this :)

FL7

'His lips found the seagull then, and he kissed her memories whole again'

That line actually made my day

Urgh, I am so glad I finally got round to reading this :)) It's so original and unique and I just adoreadore Lily living as a muggle.

You, m'dear, are a genious :D

Love your writing style!

/all hail the queen!

This was lovely and such a great read. Wonderful job Jenny! :)

Hahhahaha,no you aren' was wonderful,if a bit rushed for a TL,and there was a continuity error in between, I think-sgouldn't it have been "I love you Violet" on the mirror?Lily's friends knew her as Violet right?But it was really great and it made me the beginning of it.

if you are the queen of making angst into sap... Then your the most amazing person ever Jenny ;) I loved every bit of this one-shot, I loved how you characterized Lily and shaped her into a hostess- muggle author- who- is - just- a - girl-in-love [and yes I stole Lils sweet yet sappy line]:)

this was amazing and you deserve an uber long review from me. :) and I also loved the way you made Teddy in this as well, he almost reminded me of Lupin for awhile ;) 'like father like son' that quote will always be true. But to finish up, I loved it and it was just spectacular and fantastical. your writing will always captivate me. it will never cease to amaze me :))

and sorry if I mispell things I'm on my brothers iphone :/

This was so brilliantly written.

I realy admire any writer that can take those private philosohies we think only ouselves have... And commuting them to paper. Or rather, screen. This is utterly stunning! I'm totally gobsmacked! Merlin, I can't wait for your next fic xxx

I don't know why, but your stories always end with me crying and cursing the world for my lack of a love life (or more, lack of a successful love life.)

Your ideas are so very original, and each new plot device, whether it be a whole completely different Lily or just simply a new setting, always bring a fresh kind of feel to the usual cliches. (: I love the way you write the words into this smoky kind of scene and every adjective, every description sets the story perfectly and God, you're a brilliant writer; fact, mkay? k3