I love stories with Tiva!

Smiling at that so much:)...still smiling...

Naawwwwhhh! This was super good! I love the idea behind it, and I totally think you should continue. :)

Awww i love this... yet another story i wish was actually part of the show... :)

I just finished reading this story. I imagined it as an actual scene playing in my head and I couldn't help but laugh and smile to myself. Well written. So, will this lead Tony and Ziva into something more? I hope so. Great job.

Timmy you sly fox! AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW!

-Paige

Cute! And thank god you're one of the few writer's who actually goes over his/her work.

this was such a good story please continue!

OMGeez! Love love LOVE this story! Please continue! I would'nt make it a one-shot...it's too good of a begining! Fantastic job! :D

hello there!

You just made my day (night)!

This was unbbelievably cute!

And realistic, because it never actually gets the two of them anywhere, but it serves the purpose of making the viewers (and the other ncis people such as Abby and McGee) more knowing. And it is hilarious.

So good job!

Very cute and fairly plausible.

LOVE THIS! YOU REALLY NEED TO CONTINUE, EVEN THOUGH YOU SAID THIS WAS A ONE SHOT!I THINK YOU SHOULD MAKE IT LONGER! GREAT! AMAZING! LOVE IT!

Oh my... I am totally IN LOVE with this! 3 3 3 Ah-may-zing! Despite you saying it had some McAbby in it for some reason it came as a surprise when McGee wrote that he ejoyed dinner with her! Please please please continue the story, don't make it a one shot, because it has too wonderful of a beginning to leave it at that!