| Reviews for The Unforgiving Minute |
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Guest chapter 1 . 7/15 Why the fuck would he murder Snape?! Anyway you look at it, that’s an incredibly damned fool thing to do! |
Guest chapter 10 . 7/1 This was an absolutely amazing read. I was on the edge of my seat the whole time. I think I need to read it again, just to appreciate the small details more. God damn that was awesome. |
commenter chapter 2 . 7/1 liked it. didn’t suck. you can probably tell by the number of comments/favourites. |
AureliusBlack chapter 10 . 6/11 This was a really interesting and well written story, and thank you for writing it. If I had to describe the story in one word, it would be tight. The story’s ~80k words but it couldn’t have been told in much fewer without compromising Harry’s characterization. You did a great job of showing how he’s changed from the boy we knew, how much the war has affected him, and how much he lost as a result. Great job! |
ABeaupain chapter 10 . 6/7 Wonderfully written, with particularly good use of flashbacks. Thanks for sharing! |
Thefallenjedi66 chapter 10 . 6/5 nice epilogue, but goddamn cedric is a fucking coward, and why couldn't you give voldy and bloodier death? beat him to death with a rock, you know, the classic way |
Thefallenjedi66 chapter 9 . 6/5 (slowing claps that goes faster in time) BRAVO BRAVO! I ESPECIALLY LOVED THE REFERENCES TO THE DOOMSDAY CLOCK OF APOCALYPSE AND THE BRUTAL FIGHTING OF WHATEVER IT TAKES TO WIN THAT THE AUTHOR AND MANY OTHER WERE TOO MUCH OF A PUSSY TO DO! GOD DAMN! BEATING THE SHIT OUTTA EVERYONE AS WELL AS KILLING WITH A BLADE THAT JUST SCREAMS BADASSERY AND CLASSIC TASTES AS WELL AS WITHOUT STUPID MORALITY IN THE WAY OF WHAT IT TOOK TO MAKE THINGS RIGHT BRAVO! |
NobodyOwens5 chapter 10 . 3/17 pretty short, not sweet but definitely amazing. huge props to you for writing something as awesome as this. |
mumphie chapter 10 . 3/14 You write quite intensely! Man, at least this time a happy ending could happen. Of course, who knows what his fandom will do now. |
Helloseem chapter 10 . 2/28 Wow! Simply wow! I liked it. |
Incantations7 chapter 10 . 2/14 In some ways, this story reminded me of the story of the Martian, in “Let’s place someone in an impossible situation and then do everything possible to fuck him over more, but he still comes out on top”... It was definitely an interesting read... |
Wiwerse chapter 10 . 2/8 this was absolutely great and gave me some new ideas as well while extensive self-transfiguration occurred to me too as a way of having multiple animagus forms then the concept of fusing a plant to a creature is new very high chance I'll use it |
Julivadi chapter 10 . 2/3 WOW! Unable to put this story down. It's 5.30 am now and after 10 chapters I have to try to sleep after this. A roller coaster of a story that draws you in and keeps you enthralled. Gory at times, and hard on the senses and emotions. But, bloody hell, what a good read. One of the best time-travel tales I have found in fan fiction. I have no hesitation in adding you to my favourite authors alongside Robst, Sinyk and Old-Crow and others that I return to again and again. I look forward to reading your other stories. |
ImpulseFunWritinAnon chapter 10 . 1/24 This was excellent writing. Your duels are some of the best I've read and inspire me. Outstanding job, and thank you for sharing your work with us! There are some grammar errors here and there, but I was so enchanted by your story-telling, I gave them little notice. I suggest proof-reading. Don't worry - there isn't much. Everything else is enthralling. This is in my top 10 HP time travel stories now! |
The Great Wizard Qui Quae Quod chapter 9 . 1/7 Yeah, I don't know if you've ever tried to hit a rock (or a stone grave marker) with an axe, but if you do, the axe breaks. |