Oh, please continue this story. It was really good and your depiction of these characters is flawlessly spot-on, especially Miranda. I really want to see where this goes and how things work out between Miranda and Jack.

Loved it, so I REVIEW! I admit, that was a lame joke, but hey, eff you.

You nailed most of the characters, except maybe Jack. I could see her the way you made her behave maybe post ME2, but in the beginning of the story...? I don't know. She seemed a bit too well tempered there.

Writing is otherwise easy on the ears (can you say it like that?), I did not detect any spelling slip-ups, and the story seems engaging enough. I have no idea whether you still work on this story, and I'm sure as heck not going to nag you if you ain't, but you got my personal note of approval.

Tis a very well done and thought out fic with good attention to detail. Hope you keep on going

Lol " what the fuck am I going to wear," lol oh man I love Jack:) please update soon!

Awesome first chapter...this is the first Mass Effect fanfic i've ever read...and boy am i happy that I started with this.

Felt like an extension of the game. Especially liked how you had Miranda greet Commander Shepard with her customary what can i do for your greeting.

Awesome detail and description. Please keep up the good work and continue this story...so much potential!

Haha I liked this. Keep writing, I'm hooked. And to paraphrase the immortal Russell Peters, I get the feeling that somebody gonna get hurt real bad...