Remarkably true to the series and very much in character. Well-written and captivating. Well done.

An intriguing perspective on Atia's relationship to love vs. sex-it's obvious that Atia sees sex as a way to acquire something, whether it be power, information or just a bit of fun. You did a nice job of expressing that it's the love, not the sex, that troubles Atia about the Octavia/Servilia relationship. Well done.