Awww! This is really cute. Well done.

AW!

How very lovely! I love that Neville was looking for her, and that Harry helped him find her. Your Luna voice is absolutely perfect - spot on. I can hear her saying the lines in my head, which is a wonderful thing. Your Neville voice is a bit wavery for me, but I liked it, because it worked for how he was feeling. There were a few places that I felt completely broke the spell of the fic (namely Harry giving Neville a high-five, and Luna's last lines. I think that part, for me, was her use of repetition. That works outside of speak, but I feel as though it's a bit too premeditated for Luna, as she seems to speak, quite literally, whatever comes to her mind.) Other than that small quirp, very well done. I enjoyed this piece very much!

You are right. Neville/Luna should have been canon. D

Anyway, I liked this even though it was unbelievably fluffy. Anything Neville/Luna is a win and I couldn't help smiling when Luna compared Neville to sunshine.

Really loved it,

D

Aw, this is cute. And very, very fluffy. 3 "I Can't Believe It's Not Canon"... that's catchy. You should start a competition titled that.

Wonderful build up to this story along with the flow of it. I'm not a fan of this pairing but I think it's a cute tale. You protrayed Neville and Luna in such a lovely manner. I adored the way you used this line to describe her voice "greeted a chirpy voice" XD I've never come across such a term when descrbing Luna therefore I thought it was original. Good point with using the map :)

-Noona1

That was so adorable!

I really loved the sunrise, because that /so/ suits Luna. She's so daydream-y and out there, and I love the way you portrayed her, because you made her completely in-character!

I wish this could've been longer, I wanted to read more, ahha.

'Luna reached up and kissed him again as the new day washed over them in all its unspoken splendor.'

That was a great line, and a really great ending to the story! Wonderful fic!

-JennH.

I agree on the "I Can't Believe It's Not Canon"! And this was very fluffy indeed -nods- And I loved every word of it xD

I love good Luna/Neville fanfictions. There aren't enough of them. This one was fluffy and cute and I simply ADORED it!

Sure, it's very fluffy, but it's really cute, too. Well done. -D

TML