Reviews for Toxic Series 2: Paradise Interrupted
noellesullivan chapter 3 . 12/18/2014
OMG! The names Dean calls Chloe lol
I've been called all those
klu chapter 3 . 5/1/2014
The 'grandfather' letting Lois and Lana go free was something I didn't see coming... I am also really liking the true love story between Sam and Chloe, it's interesting that it's been nurtured and yet maintained a sort of 'sibling' innocence.
The first story was heart-wrenching; this one (despite its ending) was overall very heart-warming.I did really appreciate the fact that once they were comfortable there, the girls called John and Mary 'Mom and Dad'. It proves that they finally learned what 'normal' really is, and enjoyed it. At least now the Winchesters can tell Lois and Lana that they've known the girls were 'special' and loved them anyway.
MaddAlice chapter 3 . 12/6/2013
Poor girls.
UberAwesome chapter 3 . 3/31/2011
I will cry if you don't finish this, no joke, I'm completely serious.
bogusbabe chapter 3 . 9/3/2010
OH. MY. GOD.

Love it! Love it! Love it!

I love this story verse so much that I stayed up until 3am coz I just CANNOT fall asleep without finishing it!

I can't wait for the next segment!

I have no idea who "Grandfather" is but I imagine him to be Lionel Luthor.

Please update soon!
DirectorDanvers chapter 3 . 8/24/2010
this is good. i hope lois/chloe reunite!
Ridea chapter 1 . 8/24/2010
My god, I adore this series. I can't wait for the next part. And the next chapter of the Metahuman and Ranger. Seriously, I adore your writing. Thanks so much for posting as quick as you do!
fjdsklfjkdsljfkldsjfklds chapter 3 . 8/24/2010
Evil Chloe! Its a dream come true!
Veronica chapter 3 . 8/24/2010
Oh My God...that was awesome...Poor Chloe...Lois and Lana are free, they have no more powers and they can live normal lives...Chloe made the ultimate sacrifice...I can not wait for more...I need to see what is going to happen next...I need more...Please update...I love this stroy...I wonder what is happening to Chloe...
babyshan211 chapter 3 . 8/24/2010
OMG that was amazing. I can't wait for more.
Alice chapter 3 . 8/24/2010
Just found and read this little series and its awesome! I can't wait to read about what will happen to the family next!
The Alternative Source chapter 3 . 8/24/2010
Oh! I am very satisfied with this chapter! I think that you either (a) took my suggestion about just taking Chloe or (b) I totally read your mind and kind of figured it out before hand. lol. EIther way...very bloody and very scary. Kind of reminded me of some scenes from the show Elfen Lied. Have you ever watched that? It's an anime about a girl who has been bred all her life to be the perfect killing machine. When she escapes she kills everyone in her way and ends up in a terrible accident and loses her memory. She is saved by this boy and when she wakes she does not remember anything about her past life. But when the evil forces that had her come for her she starts reverting back to her killer instincts without knowing it to protect the boy who saved her. It was pretty bloody and it had an alright ending. (Wished it would have ended differently.) Just telling you this because it reminded me of this universe and you might be able to get some ideas from it to help you along. Can't wait for more. Ciao.

P.S. Red syringe? Hmmm...do I see Clark coming around and being under the control of Grandfather as well?
vamp1987 chapter 3 . 8/24/2010
Looks like Chloe cannot escape experimentation. There was a cure for the green shots, but what about the red ones? Can't wait to see what happens next because Sam is now devistated and determined.
Honor'n'QuincyPride chapter 3 . 8/24/2010
I'm happy they'll be normal, but I wanted them to stay together. I can't wait to see what's next for everyone.
Christy chapter 3 . 8/23/2010
you're soooo mean bc u did a cliffhanger! but i love your stories. you made a mistake b/c u called lois the youngest instead of the oldest when you had grandfather watching her. hope u update soon! and i refuse to give up on chloe/alec, chloe/harry, chloe/jacob, AND chloe/angel/angelus. i realize there are a lot, but seriously whenever you update really makes my day! you don't have to update all of them but i wish you would. keep of teh FANTASTIC work!
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