the Arra and Larten scene is so adorable, I love this story!

hope you update this-it's amazing! you got my fullest interest in this-so update this soon!

hey! this is getting really good! when are they going to get to the cirque du freak? cant wait for the next(hopefully sooon,) update! cant wait for more,

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ooooh...this is getting really good :) i really like this fic and cant wait to read more. sorry i didnt review on the last story.(the 4th hunter)but i laughed alot in that one :D hahaha

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Yaaaay! They are finally going to the cirque du freak. I read all of this in like 3 days because it was so great and I loved it! Oh and could you put more Arra and Larten moments in the story :D

Really good! And OF COURSE I'm excited! :D

This is such a good fic. All i have to say:)

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" "I would have left him with one of his parents, where he belongs. But then, it is never easy to leave a child when you have his or her best interests in heart." He stared so thoughtfully out into the trees that I almost asked why. "

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I totally never noticed this till I re-read it. Can't wait!

Preston (:

Okay...where to start.

1) I just love how you convey Larten. Love it. Love it. Love it! Honestly, he was my favourite character in the entire series and you just have a way of writing him that I find truly amazing; it's the bashful blushing, internal combusting when his and Arra's sex life is brought into conversation, how easy he is to be embarrassed. I love it. Keep it coming; More please!:D

2) Arra being all pregnant and queasy. It's incredibly realistic to have her feeling ill. ten girls my age have had children, one girl's (who is 18 like me) is due her third...and she had particularly bad pregnancy sickness -dawn till dusk. I remember speaking to the father of the kids, asking if she was okay, and he said that she couldn't leave bed and he'd had to do everything for her one day :/ That's an extreme case but like I say I like that Arra's queasy. It's realistic and I love it :D

3) Vancha. What a trooper. 'Nuff said :L

4) Bear is so so so so so so so so so cute! I loved how he reacted to Arra's answers, how Milo cheered him up, how he wakes Darren up constantly. As much as it's a shame for the character, I'm glad his mum's a whore and Frank was a Grass More Bear!

There's a million other things I like but it's my tea time so hopefully you like the review!

Preston (:

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Best story on DSS FF and it's finally updated! :D :D :D :D :D :D

I've already read it but I thought I should review twice to convey my happiness :')

Actual Reveiw next!

WHHEEEEEE! You have no idea how happy I was when I saw this had been updated :D

Goodness, everything about it is just so good! I think you write little Bear perfectly, and I love how we see this softer side of Arra when she's with him.

Silly Vancha, wanting to get to the Cirque XD And I totally got that little 'Palace of the Damned' reference!

Amazing job (as usual ;P) and keep it up! It's obvious we all still love this story to bits! :D

YEAH! WAY EXCITED FOR IT!

Yay! Update in like forever! I HATE YOU! just kidding. I, myself am horrible. It's so hard to try to make everything perfect for readers.

YAY! :D *claps and squeals* The "Sixth Path" hiatus has ended :P (Again, I'm not trying to make you feel guilty at all; it's just really good to have more of this awesome story to read -)

Anyways... on with the review! ;) So, Bear's finally awake! :) haha. (Just that alone made me really happy XP) As far as the postponed admittance: I'm actually really kind of glad Bear's still in the dark about the whole Frank thing: I think he needs to know, but at the same time it'll probably break his little heart when he finds out :,(

I'm excited that they're close to the Cirque du Freak now! :D (Plus I have a feeling I know who Vancha's "old friend" is... hehe XP) I can't wait to see what happens next! :D

Yay! You updated! :D

It's good that Bear got to stay with them, but I wonder what he'll say when he finds out when he's older that Arra killed his dad? D: That would be... bad.

Heh. I can't believe Milo has never bitten Bear xD. What a good pet.

When's Arra gonna have a baby bump? ;D Haha, and I wonder what his/her name will be :)

OH MAN. I can't wait for Palace of the Damned! I keep daydreaming about it! lol that's how obsessed I am! Aww, and it comes out on my birthday :)

Anyway, I really can't wait for your next update! Great chapter.

I like your story so much. :-) I think its interesting and well-written too. I hope the next chapter will be soon posted because of my curiosity. :D It seems there is still so much to write about so I suppose there will be many chapters yet. Am I right? :-)