Ok this story is definitely one I’m going to remember. You are an amazing writer and I am soooo gonna read the sequel. This story was very original and also incredibly saucy *wink*. Thanks so much for writing it.

This is such an unhealthy relationship. It’s fairley obvious Bella is normalizing it but you cannot have a consensual relationship with people who are or have been holding you prisoner. You’ve said 50 Rome’s they won’t let her leave. That makes her controlling.

What’s in this drink as part of Santa baby was sarcasm. It’s not actually a date rape song...he didn’t really drug her it’s a time period accurate scenario. But Bella is focused on that but can’t see the fact that by vary clear definition she is a prisoner and many including myself would argue the sex is really rape. They won’t let her leave. She’s rationalized it to a relationship but it’s really not.

The only brother that’s normal somewhat is Emmett because evidently he wouldn’t hold her hostage like the other two psychos. You’ve implied so many times they are volatile and dangerous if she even says the wrong thing. This is just so unhealthy.

Wow... Poor Bella. Strangly... Her story is a lot like my own. I was similarly abused. Of course in some ways it was different. My stepfather was my rapist. He started touching me at the young age of 3. By the time I escaped at age 13 it had escalated to full blown torture sessions for punishments. People always think I exaggerate saying that... But considering I have a crooked spinal cord as well as a twisted T1 vertebrae a my neck that causes health issues from being beaten to near paralyzation and being put in ICU in the hospital for nearly a month from a beating I have to say I disagree. He was a strong guy. He used to do boxing as a sport and was pretty well muscled. It didn't help that I was undernourished as well and kind of a scrawny kid because of it. I was never fed. They always said I was a bad kid and was to fat anyways. My mom always agreed (having escaped for nearly a decade I can now say I am pretty sure my mom was literally sick... Like in the head.) But its nice reading how well she seems to be handling it all. Sadly I didn't do as well for a long time. I have tried to commit suicide 3 times (when I was 8… when I was 15… and sometime around 17), I used to cut, developed major psychological disorders. I was diagnosed with DID (fancy way of saying multiple personalitys that my docs say developed so I could disassociate with the things that were happening), I have a Eating Disorder because of the starvation (BED) basically my Brain still is in that starvation mode where if food is put in front of you and you eat it cause you don't know when your next meal is going to be. (Mind you I am fed very well now... Probably why I am so fat actually now... My body just doesn't tell me to stop or that I'm full so I'll keep eating until I get sick). There are more issues but I won't bore you and name them all. But seriously it's nice to see a girl who comes out strong for once. It's not super realistic... But it's still very nice... So thank you.

I also wanted to let you know you are a amazing writer and I hope you never give that up. You are very talented and we are blessed you share your talent with us mortals

Read all the way to chapter 7 and it was boring

Wow! Interesting story. I enjoyed seeing Bella start overcoming her past to find love..

This was a very interesting read. it could have gone a multitude of different ways, but you've managed to make this an intriguing, funny, sad, and heartwrenching story. I laughed, cried, and may have thrown things in the process of reading this. Well fucking done!

james isn't interesting, he's a sick, sadistic monster. to bad the boys aren't vampires in this one, but hopefully the boys will kill him anyway!

This has been an interesting read. I've left you comments along the way to thank you for keeping this refreshingly different story here for readers like me to find and enjoy. I'll give part 2 a look see too. I hope you will come back to fan fiction and write again.

Edward, I think, had the best "first" I mean they were all good, but Edward had a little of everything. Slow and romantic and silly and hot and wet and wild...

I think this was a very moving chapter. Her last living relative is such an important missing part of her history it should for sure be included. Glad you through it in here.

Vibrator for the win! Who knew guys could appreciate the vibrator on themselves. Fun chapter.

I have to admit, I'm with Bella, she's too young to be pregnant. Plus how are you going to raise a child with three fathers and one mother? How will the child not feel like a weirdo once they get to school age and know the difference. Also Bella needs to get some control in her life, a direction, some normal freedom from the boys. So I'm happy she's going to college. Can't wait to see what she'll end up majoring in. Maybe a sex therapist, lol.

Well it looks like there are other chapters to enjoy, so I'll just comment on this holiday one. It's nice they are all happy and accepting of being in love with "us" and more power to them but I wonder what will happen when reality kicks in? I mean if anyone found out about their lifestyle I think it would be most difficult even though they don't seem to care, at all, what people think...I wonder if others found out and would make their working as teachers difficult, Carlisle's reputation as a doctor and other family and friends would think it obscene for sure. But in there little bubble, this Christmas was very sweet. I would have expected that the boys would have gotten her stocking stuffers, loads of girlie things, and a puppy... etc. But their gifts were meaningful.

Bella is just as much a 'freak' as the boys are, lol, she's still injured, barely able to stand and walk alone, yet she's good to go getting eaten out and giving a BJ, lol, then she needs to brush her teeth and Emmett does it for her, go figure. Good to have some light with all the drama from the past chapters.

The boys are really being irresponsible just quitting their jobs. They don't all have to be there at the hospital 23/7, Emmett is out with his injury and there is Esme...but alas that's these weirdos. lol