Poor, poor John.

Moscow rules! What an awesome scene:)-I thought dumping water over John's head to darken his hair and change the style of it was particularly clever. I enjoy your writing style a lot. I see it's been a LONG time since you updated; any chance you could coax the muse out of hiding and continue this?

Ooh, this story is going to be a right treat, I can tell and I'm only on the first chapter!
You've achieved that element of the Sherlock series that's very difficult to nail down; the BANG-BANG-BANG, something always happening, smooth elegant flow of events with very few quiet or awkward moments. It's difficult to describe a scene in your head with the as much detail as you want without slowing the rhythm of the story. Incredibly, you've found that place in the middle where you give just the right amount of info (Sherlock's facial expressions, John's state of mind, the evidence Sherlock investigates) without overloading the scenes with extraneous blahblahblah or losing the speed at which Sherlock normally zooms through every situation. I love it.
Can't wait to read the rest of it, good stuff! :)

I know you'll probably most likely never update this again but I wanted to add that I just found this and love it. The story so far itself reads like an episode.

oooo. i like it!

this fic has been great so far and very funny. i can't wait to see what happens next.

please update soon!

Amelli-Kara

:)

absolutley brilliant! should you ever update this again, i'll definantly keep an eye out for it!

PLEASE update this! its brilliant! seriously, this is a really good story and i'd LOVE to read more :D please? :)

liking this so far, just gotta ask, what it the official secrets act?

oh and:

half-expecting Mycroft to ooze out of a shadowy corner, wearing a nehru jacket and stroking a white cat. He always did have a flare for the dramatic.

LOVED that! really funny stuff! :D

I absolutely adore your story, please continue writing. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Great chapter, can't wait until the next chapter, keep going!

Wow. Amazing. I love it.

Brilliant, believable plot, amazing sherlock deductions, everything I could ever want in a sherlock fanfic. Keep up the good work!

Meg

I have officially fallen in love with this amazing and witty story of yours. You have taken the characters from the tv series and made them your own! I find it a bit hard to believe that sherlock is a druggie though, that being my only criticism. I as well as many other readers have highly enjoyed reading your story and can't wait until you post the next chapter! Till next time!

The Spring Destiny x

As a rule I generally hate OC's especially when they start to get romantically involved with a major character. Sorry to say this is no exception. Been able to mainly overlook that however, and this is great! Please update soon! I loved that bit where he draw the sign and started taunting the mi6!

Oh Sherlock's getting distracted! Heehee, like the idea of thinking Scotch, sounds like seomthing he would have alright. And what were the CIA thinking, trying to go up against him, they don't have a chance!

Sorry I missed reviewing the last chapter, I was away for the weekend.

blacky xox

love it so so annoying when people make sherlock al fluffy and non canon, but this is actually convincing! well done!