I love your writing. I think this is the third time I have read this story this month. I hope you'll come back to this site soon.

great story. just wondering when the next update will be?

I don't know if you really did drop and die, but you seriously need to finish this story. I'm dying here waiting

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You have to finish this story. It's just too good not to

This is a fantastic story, I wish you would finish it. The story doesn't deserve desertion...

PLEASE FINNISH! this is such an amazing story. It kills me to see a really great story like Crystal waves and Calm Between Storms not finished. I do realize that you are in collage and that you are busy most every second of your life. But please, I am on my hands and knees begging you to finish it.

This was almost more fluff than I could handle-excellent! And its refreshing to see someone who's not afraid of going the extra mile on details ;] I'm curious of how far you'll have Jeremie and Aelita go, please, update soon!

They defiantly are entering in to more deeper waters.

I must say, you are REALLY good at describing the surroundings and nature, you really have a way of that.

Poor Odd, he won't be making it back to Kadic at this rate, probably pushed into a volcano. Even if Aelita did get her revenge by beating the crap out of him, he still has Yumi and Jeremy to deal with (a one-way trip to Digital Sea is easy enough).

And kudos on the over 30,000 words and longest chapter, was fantastic.

Great chapter, yet again!

Your ability to describe things in this story makes it one of my favorites, you have true talent my friend, ad you certanly use that talent well.

5/5 on the story thus far.

Their is only one word that could possibly come close to describing this chapter, and indeed the entire story, and that word is: Awww

another great chapter.

cant wait to read more.

another great chapter.

keep up to the good work.