"Bonded by mutual respect and the fear of their own reflections." There's something that I really like about that line. Lovely fic. :3

What I love most about this story is the trust, the bond between Shino and Tenten, and how well expressed it is in so few words. These thousand words paint more than a picture to me, and I thank you for writing this story.

Author-san,
I am now intensely curious. Please make this a full story!

Take care, and may God bless you,

Meiyo

nice

I'm loving how you just toss into the story, but isn't a bowl of rice next to a plate of curry rice redundant?

Wow! That was a wonderfully described scene and naturally revealed situation. The understanding and acceptance between them is heartwarming despite its sad origins. I can't help wanting this to be more than a oneshot and agree with Sonar that perhaps you should consider adding Angst or Hurt/Comfort as the second category.

That was some good written but a little sad romantic story. Something so destroying the cheerful Tenten, but Shino is there for her. The only one who understands what happens in her mind, to console her and treat her in a normal way. No pity, no remorse, no shock due her injuries.

...and the one who will need pity is the one who did this. There will be a funeral, I guess, only if Shino does not get there first...

that was really sweet. quite surprised though, at what had happened to tenten. but the thing is: if that actually did happen, your fic would not be all too far away from truth. great job!

Very cute.

That should of been rated for some angst as well. I actually did seem to like it.

I think this is a very understated interesting little fic... I actually like how you don't really explain the backstory just let the moment exsist on it's own. I really hope you write more ShinoTen in future, you really seem to have a knack for them :)