| Reviews for He Lives On |
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Larissa chapter 1 . 12/14/2012 Umm... Why didn't you continue? You just can't give a girl a taco and take it from her after 1 bite. NO FINISH! Please! |
SilverBullet2theheart chapter 1 . 3/18/2012 You have succeeded in making me cry. At first, I thought this was going to be a cute little Christmas fic, but as I read on, the horror began to set in, and then it hit me. I honestly cannot recall a fanfiction that made my cry like this. It is a heart-breaking, beautifully written piece, and it was my pleasure to read and review. Thank you. Lots of love, SilverBullet2theheart |
Wow chapter 1 . 8/21/2011 I am sobbing right now. No joke. Amazing one shot. |
Wow chapter 1 . 8/21/2011 I am sobbing right now. No joke. Amazing one shot. |
WorthlessPleasure chapter 1 . 4/17/2011 Alex, I don't know what to say about this. It was horrible because it pretty much made me cry. It was amazing because that was the point in the first place. On top of that, it was beautifully written, and (as much as I hate to say it), you DID warn me about this. So yes, it was incredibly angsty. But I liked it. |
ILoveBTR4eva chapter 1 . 2/18/2011 ...Amazing... xD |
Saxophones chapter 1 . 2/11/2011 I love this story - it's so touching and sweet and heartbreaking all at the same time. I guess I'm a lot like little Logan - my dad died of AML 2 months before I was born. My mom, unlike Camille, decided to tell me basically nothing about my dad. I don't even know where he was buried. That might explain why, to me, this story is so amazing. |
wish91 chapter 1 . 2/5/2011 I just cried reading this |
ceciliabtr chapter 1 . 1/16/2011 it maked me cry! so deep ! great history , i think Cancer is shocking for everybody my mother was with cancer but she recovered and now shes totally healthy but its hard i know it |
poeticjustice13 chapter 1 . 1/14/2011 Gosh this is such a nice story. |
2 kool 2 spell 'kool' right chapter 1 . 12/22/2010 i loved little hollow, (who didnt?) lol, and miss fenway told me to check out this. i LOVED it. logan/camille. best couple on the planet. u are an amazing writter, i loved this. it was great. |
Paige chapter 1 . 11/1/2010 Oh my goodness good lord, I have tears streaming down my face as I write this. This story was so epic I can't even process all of it. Beautiful |
Fish Stick Friday chapter 1 . 9/24/2010 So Laura recommended that I read this story of yours. I promised her I would and would tell her that she sent me. Right off the bat, I am a huge Logan/Camille shipper, so seeing it classified as Logan/Camille instantly got my attention. The part where Camille said that decorating the foyer was a privilege she wanted to share with Logan was so incredibly sweet! As a Logan/Camille shipper, I died. Seriously. Lol. At first I was seriously offended when you said Logan had always been tripping over anything. Then, I remembered the episode Big Time Sparks. Gustavo told the dogs they break everything we touch. Logan was all, "We do not!" in a high-pitched voice, leaned on the desk, and broke it. Maybe he is a bit...clumsy...after all... :) Turn into a snowman. Lol. Was that intentional. In Big Time Bad Boy. Carlos was all, "You'll need a tree hat." I forget who said, "We'll need cool code names." Oh, that was James. Anyhow, Logan's code name was "(the?)snowman" Is that where you got your inspiration from, or am I the only one who noticed that parallel? ROTFL! "My butt is not litte," -dies- HOLY FREAKING COW! That was Logan and Camille's kid? I did not see that one coming. That means they, before he...aww! OMG! Little Logan was born three days after Logan died? That is like so...sad isn't even a strong enough word to describe it. -dies- Okay, coming from someone who USED to be a serious gamer, and still plays video games now, just not as much, I loved the video game analogy. Logan and Camille got married? -faints- Oh my goodness! Logan asking Camille to tell their unborn child about him, and Camille's response. Wow. Just...wow! The if, when debate between Logan and Camille, yeah that was brutal! OMG! Logan's death! I'll tell you the same thing I told Laura. You're evil for killing Logan! Not really, but yeah, why did you kill him? OMG! James' "See you later, Logan." -dies- Wow, the part where Camille was talking to Logan's headstone. You had me on the verge of tears. Big deal, right? Well actually, yeah. I'm a guy. A sensitive and emotional guy, but a guy nonetheless. Most people assume that I'm a girl because let's face it, most people on here are, but I'm a part of the minority. I love how you alluded to James and his brief drug problem. I'm a huge fan of Miss Fenway myself. Ask her yourself, if you don't believe me. I love how descriptive your writing style is. It's nice to see paragraphs that actually look like paragraphs. it's nice to see stories that aren't entirely dialogue. It's nice to see stories that are indented properly when a new paragraph is necessary. Laura also tells me that your a huge James fan. My order goes Logan, Carlos, Kendall, James. However, she also told me that reading your stories changed how she viewed James, so who knows? Maybe if I give your stories a shot, it'll change my opinion of James too. Though I am skeptical that he'll break my top two. Logan and Carlos are pretty solid with me. Apart from Logan/Camille moments, I live for Carlos/Logan bromance moments. Which reminds me, I do not write slash, but I actually do read slash. So if you do write slash, if it is good, because let's face it, some slash is SO predictable..., I might give that a read too. Hmm...I think that's all I have to say. Notice how many times I died in this review. Oh, sorry if there are any spelling mistakes. The review box is doing the jumpy thing it does when I write a long review. I loved this! *adds to favorites* Really fantastic job! |
Me chapter 1 . 9/19/2010 Wow |
Vas Happenin Fellas chapter 1 . 9/19/2010 Hi. I've been reading fanfics for years, and this has been the greatest. I read this a long time ago, but I didn't got a chance to put a review. Now I'm in it again, I just wanna request you to please continue the story. This made me sob, really. Reading it was just like reading any sad, yet wonderful novel. I hope you continue on with this. That would be highly appreciated. |