| Reviews for Life's not fair |
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   Orichidee chapter 4 . 6/23/2012 Eine tolle Geschichte!Bin gespannt wie es weiter geht? |
| Simoman chapter 4 . 11/16/2011 Really nice work so far. Keep up the great work! |
| sophie29 chapter 4 . 9/1/2011 awww.. this is really good! hope u can update this one. |
| Iluvyeachick chapter 4 . 7/19/2011 Up dates |
| MysticalKC chapter 4 . 12/30/2010 I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH! PLEASE UPDATE SOON! I WANNA READ MORE! :D |
| nicensweet28 chapter 4 . 9/27/2010 I'm loving it. Hope Rifus is okay. Can't wait to see how everyone reacts when they find out Chuck has a child. I'll Be waiting :) |
| Chase.M206 chapter 4 . 9/17/2010 I mean absolutely no offence when I say this, but if I were you I would definitely consider getting a different beta. This story has so much potential but it will not acheive it's best until you get a new beta! I like the plot but it's hard to enjoy the story due to the constant punctuaction/grammar/spelling mistakes. They're really distracting. Once again, please don't take offence; I am simply offering some constructive critism from one writer to another. |
| Cupcake.Of.Death chapter 4 . 9/8/2010 i really like this story so far. please update soon x |
| shadylady21 chapter 4 . 9/8/2010 Loved the chapter. I like how Chuck was across the street. I wonder how long it'll take him to put 2 and 2 together. Can't wait to see everyone's reactions. |
| rose chapter 4 . 9/8/2010 great chapter! i can't wait for chuck's reaction! update soon!3:) |
| Guest chapter 2 . 9/2/2010 I like this concept but the grammar mistakes (ex: felted is not a word) take away from your story. Get a beta & keep writing! |
| AshleyM15 chapter 3 . 8/30/2010 awesomee :) keep posting |
| reviewgrl chapter 3 . 8/28/2010 Can't wait to see whathappens next. Update soon! |
| itoldyouso2718 chapter 3 . 8/26/2010 Please keep updating i adore this story. |
| s m Neal chapter 2 . 8/25/2010 i like payback with a capital B |
