Hilarious! I like it. Keep up the good work.

I can't stop smiling, this is perfect!

ALL MY FEELS

That's basically my first instinct when it comes to reviewing your work. Or, like, if I could just communicate with .gifs or ragefaces, I'd be much more comfortable. Because I'm lazy, and because your writing consistently impresses me to such a degree that I find it hard to really organize my thoughts and speak coherently without repeating myself a lot.

This was hilarious. Setsuna and Michiru - the most elegant, and refined, and aloof ladies of the entire franchise - just losing their shit over a spider. The absolute seriousness with which they approached the spider - the RESOLVE

Just

Perfection

Particularly when you contrast the panic here with the coolheadedness they've displayed literally in the face of death, it's just hilarious and I was grinning like a total dork the entire time I read this.

I mentioned in my review of Family how much I love Setsuna and like to see her relationships with the others explored in greater depth than the show provided, and this was another great example of how amazing those dynamics can be when given the proper attention. Sure, this was a silly little story about killing spiders, but once again you managed to outline a complex relationship with relative depth in a very small space. Michiru and Setsuna are really comfortable together, and there's a great deal of mutual respect and trust - which explains Michiru's intense alarm at Setsuna's panic at the very start of the story. Hotaru wasn't left out either! Michiru's immediate "WHAT ABOUT THE BABY" response was endearing and totally in character. Her mothering instincts have always been suggested as very keen, and I don't think that's an aspect of her character that gets enough attention. Perhaps it's just a side effect of her precieved icy exterior - kind of hard to imagine her speaking in baby talk or blowing raspberries.

This is officially super OT.

O well.

Michiru hitting Setsuna in the face was amazing.

I was afraid that being attacked by Michiru would hurt their relationship

that perhaps Setsuna would give Michiru The Boot

Or that there would be some Sole-searching

But, instead, they were able to Heel their relationship by killing that spider

Talk about Toeing the line, though.

Could have had a Flat out poor ending.

If you love puns because you're a big geek like me

YOU'RE WELCOME

If you're a normal person

I apologize profusely.

Also, bonding over shoes is the greatest line ever. you're amazing.

-Orange

Oh, wow. I'm just sifting through Sailormoon fanfics, since they are not very likely to have a crappy plot I wouldn't read, but I'm digressing.

Well, as I read, my iPod id in shuffle, then when I got to the part when Michiru got her flats, the song "One Man's Courage" by Immediate Music played, which made my reading funnier because of the music's dramatic tune! Ah, it made it sound like they were going to do some brave, heroic thing in the kitchen!

Good story, too. I read it before, but I'm bored, so I'm reading stories to see why I read them a few months ago.

This had me hollering with laughter. I absolutely love this piece and can't say enough good things about it. While I'm usually more interested in things that happen around Haruka and Michiru, it's always nice throw Setsuna into the mix from time to time. Not to mention it's wonderfully to see their girly sides come out from time to time as well.

I couldn't but smile when reading this. An excellent story!

Was that the end or will you continue? I didn't see the 'complete' label above.

Alright, let's get to it. Christening the couch? That's nothing, bet there are other places H&M Christened too. Tables, washer, dryer, stairs, ceilings, patio, window pane...wait! My bad. My dirty mind was playing tricks on me, that or I'm delusional, or wishful thinking.

Ummm...thought H&M were well off, where the hell they living? The slums? I imagine Michiru being OCD clean & Setsuna as being impeccable. Where'd all the damn roaches come from then? I know! Dale Gribble! He must have planted the pests in hopes of getting Michiru to hire Dale's deadbug. You must be thinking: [what the fuck is this girl talking about...?]

You love my ranting. Admit it!

Is this because of the 'can't even kill one bug' comment? Hmm, I don't know, you'd be surprised the number of boyish lesbians who are utterly terrified girly girls when it comes to creepy crawlies.

lol! insane! Being able to save the world and being afraid of a cockroach!

LOL!

Amazing. Simply, amazing.

I'm still giggling.

Hahaha I absolutely love your one shots! I first had my suspicions when they said Haruka usually takes care of them and when michiru came back with her flats I knewwwww it. :) The wholeee flour and cookie background was just icing on the cake. My favorite line was 'it's in your hair!' I laughed sooo hard :D