Is Draco joking saying he doesn't know where Angela fits in with their lives ? Hello she's mother of his child. They're going to have to talk to each other so they can share problems and stuff about their child. You can't just get rid of the mother she's always going to be involved and if Draco didn't want that then he shouldn't have slept with her. Has he never heard of co-parenting obviously not. And here is Astoria being Childish again she's acting like Draco cheated on her but if they were on break then he didn't did he. It seems to me that Draco is trying to make Angela and Astoria both happy instead of thinking about his child. I'm so done with this story. You've clearly not got a grasp of the characters of Draco and Astoria makes me wonder if you've even read the books because they act nothing like they do in the books. I'm done goodbye good luck with the story maybe you're characters will become less Childish one day but I can't see it happening. And please if you see this as hate which it is not its constructive Crirism , do not send me a angry pm. Seems to happen when people can't take advice. So yeah don't pm unless you're not sending hate. Goodbye.

Astoria is acting like such as child threatening to dirvoce Draco. And Draco staying with her I mean is he stupid his child should come first. I think the adults are forgetting the children in this. They're really stupid an if they're gonna act like that they shouldn't have children. Also how in the world did cassy find out who her dad is I'm sure it's mentioned how in the chapter but she and her brother just suddenly know. If they carry on acting like children I'm not reading this no more. For godsake a they're in their THIRTIES.

Why is she lying about who her dad is ? Also I don't get why she never told who is he was in the first place. She didnt know he was a wizard so why didnt she just tell her?

Contradicting yourself a bit in this chapter. First You say "No, of course not. But I don't want her mother around you" Astoria told him."

And then later on you say "She is the mother, she will be a part of our lives once we let Cassiopeia in" Draco explained to her. He knew that they would not be able to keep Angela out of their lives completely. And he wasn't sure if he even wanted too.

"I know that. Which is why I am telling you I need time to figure out how to work this all out." Astoria said in softer tones."

How does that make any sense first shes saying she doesn't want draco with Angela then she's saying she knows and is ok with it?make up your mind. Also when you said "in softer tones" it should be "in a softer tone" you can't say tone because she's only using one tone of voice. You can't use different tones of voice all at the same time can you? You can change your tone but not use multiple ones at the same time. You should be looking into getting a beta if you haven't already got one as you have quite a few grammar mistakes that you're falling to see as you do it in all your chapters.

Your little note at the top I don't get? Like if you've added a bit to the story you should write it in or put it in a flashback or just mention it somehow in the chapter but not in a authors note it's a bit silly also people are less likely to read a authors note than the actual chapter.

"Who do you want Draco to end up with? Astoria, Angela or neither... "

But Astoria does in two years time so?

She didnt even tell him cassy is his? All she said was that she looks like him which doesn't confirm anything. Might look like him but that doesn't mean the kid is his does it? She actually needs to tell him.

So you're telling me draco had two kids in the same year? Wouldn't that mean he cheated on his wife? P

This is good but at the start of a bit of speech you seem to forget to use a capital letter.

Great ending

Really lovely

Really good go on!

really good go on!

Normally I would cheer for the wife but Astoria's behavior makes that too hard. I can imagine that having an exgirlfriend and her child wander into your lives would be very taxing but Astoria is just very immature. I would not want her to be my wife when she behaves like a spoiled child and throws tantrums. I don' t think I would be able to trust Astoria wih my newly found daughter. I am rooting for Angela and Draco.

super good go on