Rachel kissed Percy... Again!? And the worst part is her didn't pull away...

"It was something that would've happened anyway"... Seriously? Now that's cheating on your girlfriend in my book. Dating someone and thinking about someone in your past and what your life would've been like if things would've worked out the way you wanted it to.

I know that these feelings were really intense and confusing... I could actually feel the way Annabeth was feeling for the past couple of days. I love Percabeth and I can't deny that. You fanfic was amazing. With all these feelings I cried for Annabeth, as if I were her and could feel what was exactly happening with her. But here in this fanfic, to be frank... If I were Annabeth, I would've broken down, broken up with Percy, though I would've saved him, taken that dagger for him, but that'd be it. I wouldn't have ever forgiven him for kissing another girl...again and I don't know how I would've handled it, but I sure would have broken down. But that was the best thing about your fanfic... It made me feel things. "Don't beat yourself up on this" Lol...;)

But after crying for a while, I realized that your fanfic was amazing, and maybe this is what sometimes relationships become like... complicated. But I am happy that Percy and Annabeth got back together. (Though maybe Annie wouldn't be able to forgive him... In this fanfic... I'm just happy that Rick didn't write such stuff, because then it would've been officially...OMG! No way:()

But loved it no doubt. Keep it up. Different fanfics are always amazing.

OMG ONE OF THE BEST FANFICS I HAVE EVER READ!

I wonder what's going on with Annabeth.

Really interesting.

wow that was ... WOW good job keep it up

Best thing in the workd

You mean what's HIS name? Mwhahaha

Great story!

Hey there
I read your story.. Its awesome. I just did not understand two things...first what exactly was annabeth's dream about Luke. Secondly you never really mentioned what was going on between Annabeth and her dad, and so this thought was pondering me a lot so if you could please explain it to me it'd be great. Other than that, it's a great story. Really awesome. Keep writing
I have a fan fiction account with the same name. So u know u could PM me or something.
Well keep writing cause I am looking for some great stories! _
~Sherry~

Hey there,
Your story is very interesting and amazing, but I just did not understand Annabeth's dreams about Luke. Also a thought has pondering me,
You never really told what was going on between Annabeth and her dad, why she kept pulling from Percy and what she was hiding from him. so I was wondering if you could please explain it to me. Other than that, your works' amazing..
I have an account on fanfiction with the same name...so please clear my doubts...
Still your story was amazing. Keep writing. _
~Sherry~

l loooooooooved your guy's story sooooo muuuch !

I went through so many emotions reading this. It's such an amazing story and I absolutely love the content. :)

i really really really like this story! it's GREAT so far. but i'm really nervous about the way annabeth is acting. but i love it! and guess what!? THE BLOOD OF OLYMPUS IS COMING OUT IN FOUR DAYS! AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! I CAN'T WAIT!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

Awesome!Cool story!