so excited like you wouldn't believe. love love love this story. cant wait to read the next installment.

Plz make another one

I hope you write more. I really want them to reunite. This story was great. I loved it. Especially the twist. And it's funny too. Hope you continue. But this story was written so long ago I dont think you will. Which I am extremely disappointed by. Anyway, I hope you do

I hope you write more to this story. Its great

Loved this story. Your a great writer. Definitely made me laugh. Love it

this is where i want to be one day i know that day i will drop the soap and let the black men gang bang my ass i'm addicted to black cocks it would be one day i want to be one cumdump that will never stop giving

I honestly think it should continue with the reunion but thats just my opinion cause I really liked this story

That I personally felt like it was fucking trash. It’s just the way that you chose the number 6 of the salads to be the shut call. Yes I know grimmjow could probabaly rank higher if he tried but number one of the salads is still number one. Make him the shut call. Also Aise s the leader because he’s SUPPOSED to be more powerful than all of them. And why strawberry. That’s makes no sense when he has ORANGE hair. Why does Aozen have pink hair. That doesn’t make sense or am I getting that mixed with a different character. Also a serious problem was the “sex” scene. So the telling me that this “not gay” guy was brutally raped to the point of screaming and is t a masochist either yet was aroused in any way. If your not gay there is no spot. It might feel good but the way that was described grimmjow was slammingn into it so it wouldn’t actually feel good. Also how did he get hard as fell onto a solid tile floor was called a slut by the obvious idiot and then raped even more brutally. If your not gay or masochistic you simply could not be arosued by that. It simply is t possible. Also he said Ichigo was tighter than a woman. That was outright stupid. This virgin is being fuck in the ass in extreme pain on cold tile. Any ONE of those things equals tight ass but you have all of them so yeah that was stupid espescially considering your supposed to fuck vaginas which means they aren’t supposed to be ridiculously tight. And he amount of cum was ridiculous I mean it wasn’t hot at the point so the cum thing sucked. And another thing does that dumbass not know what slut and whore means. A those are very common derogatory terms for women. They mean to have many lovers so you brutally and unconsensually raling someone isn’t them being a white it’s you being a rapist. And how is he not muscular when in sports you are constantly working out during games and drills and practices. Most drill require outright body building so slightly muscular and light weight is unrealistic. Honestly I hated it and I don’t why. Don’t say because those reasons because those are my justifications for hating it but I hated it before I realized those things. And no one mistreats there bitch like that. Your rough not brutal. And yes I was extremely horny when reading this I’m bisexual leaning much more towards men and I’m into everything except for this furries dragons gang bangs interracial black white hispanic Asian straight gay masturbation you name it but this sucked. So yeah.

OMG please carry one wit' dis! I luv it and I hve read dis over a million times! I can't stop reading it cause its amazing like I luv BL and this one is the best one ever and BTW its OK to have a messed up head cause I do to so yh :D I luv BL like its the best! Oh yh and could ppl plz wish me a happy birthday cause its on the 9th :) I rlly hope you carry this on xx Anonymous ;)

*checks watch* ...yah its been a while since the update.

Please make more chapters of this.
Maybe even one more if you'd like. Though readers would actually consider reading more chapters of this beauty.
Thanks

hey did you actually dropped the sequel? )

quite deranged but I say nice for the style.

loves it
Wants it

Holy shit please write a single chapter of them meeting again pls