Oh, the feels! Could you please make an alternate ending were she lives? I would love that a lot! :D

This is so sad. I am sort of wondering if my life will somewhat turn out like Ayame's...

Love,
Chiharu (KalikaSophia)

awwwwwww that was so sad and romantic a tragic romance !

ok that was really sad :(

... This was really sweet, and incredibly written, it's just...Lucy was actually written about a couple who regretted the abortion of their unborn child. After the procedure, they felt incredibly guilty and went for counseling. The psychiatrist told them to name their baby, and no they named the baby Lucy. It's not a big deal (the first time I heard it, I thought it was about some guy talking to his dead girlfriend about his new girlfriend who broke up with him or something...), but I just thought I'd let you know.
That aside, you did a WONDERFUL job, and it was really sad and depressing...

I cry every time I read this. Brilliantly done.

wow your story is alsome

NOOOOO DX

I knew I put this story off for as long as possible with good reason.

My subconscious was reminding me what a sad song 'Lucy' is and how upset I would get when I read this..

Too bad I don't listen to my subconscious, huh?

Man, I started crying a few paragraphs in..

And I still haven't stopped, and the song is over.

The story is over.

And its all so sad.

But you should know.

I do love it.

Skillet is amazing.

I just love John Cooper's voice.

Oh wow. I knew this would be sad as soon as I saw that it was off of Lucy. I love Skillet; they are my favorite band and the song Lucy is incredibly bittersweet and awesome in that way. I wasnt sure how you'd fit the two together but I think you did a great job. This is so sad; if I actually cried easily I would be bawling right now. :( Good job on this really no matter how much you 'just threw it together' it came out great