Wow, just wow. This is great :)

Dang. Killer ending right there. I was really hoping you would write the whole scene from John's pov too. *Clicks follow button just in case*

Oo fantastic job! If they had done this scene on the show i bet it would have gone just like this... you wrote johns pov PERFECTLY! I am in awe of your writing skills.

Hands down, the BEST interpretation of what happened between I've seen yet. I truly wish they filmed this literal scene. In a world of shitty fan fiction, you nailed it

FAN!

very well done :) i always wondered what happened before the pool scene and I really like your portrayal of it. I like how John is not weak. I know he isn't but next to Sherlock it is hard to remember that. again, good job! :)

Nice missing scene.

Loved it. Most definitely the best John!POV I've read for this scene.

Very good! poor John, he always gets in trouble, but we love it!, lol

Very well-written snippet. I enjoyed this.

Well. I love this. I was a bit confused at first - I don't know if you intended this (or maybe I am imagining it!) but there's a rhyme in the first paragraph, "flat/back" and then it switches to dialogue, which is when I realized it that was just a cool paragraph and not a poem. :) I love your characterization, it's right on, and the imagery was great; I could picture everything in my head perfectly. The only criticism I could possibly make is the cliffhanger ending, because even though everyone knows what happens next, it does function as a cliffhanger. Actually, you cut it at a perfect point, it left me thinking, but on the other hand I would LOVE LOVE LOVE to see the rest of the scene from this perspective. Please? It wouldn't be pointless, because of all the tension between the characters... figures Watson is the most badass when the scene is from Sherlock's viewpoint :(

Again, wow! I love your Sherlock fanfictions, I think this is a great representation of the missing scene, and you understand the war mentality that Watson is operating with. You've got the characters down pat, and I can see the scene running very closely along these lines if they did show it in the episode. I hope to see more Sherlock stories from you in the future. I'm impressed, and I must say as a compliment to you, that is not an easy feat. In the world of poorly written, contrived plot fanfictions, it's a real treat to find gold among the pyrite.

I hope when I begin to write Sherlock stories I can capture the characters as you have in this.

Given that I've seen the episode this fic is a 'missing scene' for this was amazing. Creepy and angsty and very well written. I'm still squirming as I write this! Poor John. Mean Jim. That coat...with the fur edging...I'm picturing it now. Well written! Nice (but not nice!) fic!

Yay Action Watson ( as my friends like to call this version). I had wondered what happened in between. Good job.

I really enjoyed reading this story. They don't show you how John Watson got captured so it's always interesting to wonder how much of a fight he would've put up. Great job! :)