love it JESUS bless he loves u prayin 4 u

this is just a thought; but maybe bella could say...
Queston!question! What the fuck do u guys think ur doing! You wak into my town KILL my father, and then just straight up kid-nap me. Fuck you all! i want answers!* ( she could even get up at this part, and i dont know maybe she could show that, she isn't scared anymore, but more pissed then anything)*Bella stands up, and looks down at the sand and then throws some at Peter
I know its a short little thing but it was just a though i have down on paper but its not that good. to be honest they really sink. lol

Peter...
Now why did u just do that i thought we were pass the mad, pissed, thorwing staged? now Bella if u just shut up, and let answer your qestions maybe you would get something out of it.*(Peter stands u, ans walks over to Bella in the coner at the other side of the tent. Holding his hands out infront of him not wanting her to thorw something else at him)* See look at how hard that was?
See from this point Peter would be explaining everything to her, as best as she can. What really turns it around is that Maira comes in an starts going off because there is a big hole in the tent. She starts off all sweet but then turns rotten apple or something .. I'm just trying to make analigy..
thats Really all i got that is not dumb.. lol well let me know what yout think.. 3

I love the part where Bella's words run together. That was really well done. A very simple sentence that says a lot. You're funny. I liked Maria's POV.

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so liking this story. i can't wait for your next chapter. post again soon you are all doing wonderfully.

love this! i wonder what jasper wanted to talk to maria about before she went all slut on him!

i hope bella doesnt act eddie does cause she was born in the same time he was also you spell charlotte like that! love this so far!

very cool

very cool

very cool

I'm lovin your story so far... hope you update soon

I enjoyed reading this so far. i do hope you continue, is this one of those Peter becomes a brother figure type friendships between he and Bella? curiosity is a killer.

I am latin american and you pronounce Maria as ma-ree-ah

OMGslezy that ma frend was AWESOME! Now if you update i'll give uuuuu... 1 MILLION Dollars... worth of reviews... MWHAHAHAHAHAHA!

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well so far you have started off good. please do update.