Pude leerla gracias al Traductor, me gustó mucho, fue interesante y romántica, a mí me gusta esta pareja aunque por desgracia no se pudo mostrar mas de ellos en el manga o en el anime

Muy linda historia, gracias por compartirla

aw cute but short.

-Mandella-sama

Awh that was cute

~AL

*giggles* a really sweet addition to the story! rather waffy, but still in character (kinda, in that I can see Saitou acting like that).
good job!

weird! Not a chance! It was a fantastic ending! I love those "faraway, legend" endings, where you kinda bring the reader back out into a bigger picture...if I'm making any sense? Anyway, the point is, I like it! _ Though their "relationship" (if it can be called that) was awfully sudden. But write more! I like your style. and this site definitely still needs more Saitou/Tokio fics.

I read this story a while back on , but I haven't had a chance to comment on it until now. Well done. Very well done. I liked how you gave a personality to the characters you made, but still kept the original characters personalities. I can see Saito doing all that. One of my favorite Saito fics ever.

Very cute! I couldn't stop reading! It was so interesting! Oh, I hope you write more S/T stories!

sugoi!

my fave pairing!

great story too! keep writing :)

Oh my god! that was so sweet! the made out inmediatley! C-O-O-L

Kawaii! _ _ MUSH! SAP! YAY! _ *hugs*

AWWWWW... so sweet...

awwww... *sniffles* that's so sweet!... I cant imaging Saitou as a loving husband tho.. lol. hahaha but I guess with his wife he's allowed to be different ne? _ soo good! sorrie it had to end!

Kawaii! _ _ _ I love it! *hugs*

*gasp* NOOoo.. u CANT just end it THERE!.. must have MOOREEEEEE! AIYEEEEEEEEE... do you think.. um.. u can write just a teeny bit more about what happens... ahem.. AFTER? lol.. any besides... what about the riskbreakers? dont they want her dead still?

Yaayy! *claps* Please write more Saitou/tokio fics!