Clay does deserve more, and while it is chilling to see him in this state, I can definitely feel that it happened

Although brief, this is an amazing piece of work. Clay, I feel, is criminally unappreciated—and so I'd like to thank you for writing this. Your use of italics adds so much to this story, and the prose is elegant and understated. In short: excellent work.

alsome

*shivers* that was... Frightening. I'm concerned that you can write insanity so well- you're not going loopy are you?

Loved it. It gave me the chills, because even though we don't know much of him, you perfectly depicted what his final act might have looked like

Ooh, creepy. Effective use of italics. There does need to be more writing about Subject 16.

Daw, you flatter me with your incessant flattery!

I still 3 this drabble. Woohoooo Subject 16! He needs lovin.

whoa. this was amazing i actually like subject 16 i thought what happened to him was tragic because the same thing could have easily happened to desmond! love this story!