I have read a lot of James-Lily fanfictions over the years, and most of them showcase Remus, Sirius and James to be very mean to Peter. Which I don't think was the case. I had always thought of it like they didn't pay enough attention to Peter, and the Death Eaters would have noticed that and recruited him out of school. Peter, being the kind of personality that he is, wouldn't have been able to hide his change of allegiance while he was in school; one of the three would have caught up to it. I have never felt that Peter was devious. Peter was just weak. Even though he has been mentioned in a very few places in your fanfiction, I liked his portrayal.

On the Jily side, I liked this version of them getting together. It felt more natural, rather than being rushed. And Lily figuring out that it was his handwriting instantly, was spot on! There are many people who recognise people's handwriting instantly, and Lily seemed exactly that. She also looked forward to the notes probably because she already knew who they were from. Overall, a great job! :D

-Ankita

Love! This honestly made me smile, it was so sweet

James going out of his way to see her smile, when will your fav ever

This was so fun and perfect! I absolutely love it!

Loved your story so much...it's really difficult to find a story where James isn't acting like an idiot, also while some of the stories are brilliantly written they fail to portray the characters with the dark things going on. I think its brilliant that you made your story revolve around that particular aspect and still make it so wonderfully beautiful

No words. Its so good. I m crying so bye.

This is so beautiful

This was such a beautiful story i loved it...and that sherbet lemon reference just...perfect

OH MY GOD THAT WAS BEAUTIFUL

EEEKKK! I loved it! Why did u have to bring in the sherbet lemon? I broke down crying.. ( Jily makes me very emotional) I loved the ending too! I LOVED IT!

Absolutely loved this story. I think there are too many James and lily fics where they fight constantly. It's nice seeing them get along and fall in love. Great story!

Too cute to handle!

This was utterly sweet. It really brought a smile to my face. Such a lovely story- it flowed beautifully.

AWWWWW! THAT WAS AMAZING! YOU ARE SUCH A GREAT WRITER! I'm just dying!

THE SHERBET LEMONS THING MADE ME DIE BECAUSE THATS THE CANDY DUMBLEDORE WAS EATING THE NIGHT THE POTTERS DIED OH MY GOSH THAT WAS BRILLIANT.

Okay but no, really, now that I've released my emotion, that was probably my favourite bit in a very good, well written story. Lily and James make me happy, you seem to have captured all the characters' personalities despite the fact that we've only gotten a glimpse of them in canon, and I think that your Lily-introduces-Dumbledore-to-Sherbet-Lemons-which-is-why-he-is-eating-them-the-night-she-dies-in-her-memory thing is remarkably clever and suble.

Keep up the great work. I probably already reviewed one of your stories like this lol.

-VolleyballGoddess