An amazing story except for the fact that it makes Harry a bit too powerful and mature, both magically and politically. The only time I could bear reading Super! Harry.

I've always disliked Remus. I was in junior high school when I read the books and got introduced to the world of Harry Potter (I read the books first before I watch a movie adaptation). Back then I was a goody goody innocent kid but I already thought that Remus was weak. Now that I've been exposed to the real world, I see Lupin as nothing but a pathetic waste of air. It irks me how he even ended up with Nymphadora.

I really enjoyed this. You’re writing is consistent and detailed and the politics and moves you use are inspired. I know it’s been over a year since you updated but, please PLEASE update again. I really want to know where you planned to go with this and I hope you pick it up again.

It's a good story, sad it wasn't finished

I would love to see where the next chapter goes

Damn good story, wish it wasn't abandoned

This is really good. I'm sorry that some reviewers are trolling you.

Pls pls pls post the next chapter this is soooo good pls continue

I think a revision is needed asyou do better with the political background stuff then the action which comes off weak. This story should focus solely on the political/social aspects. You can't be good at everything and action is clearly one thing where any time an action scene happens hype builds up then...pffffft it fizzles out.

It's like being excited for a thunderstorm and you watch all the latest guidance models then the last few hours the storm steers a different way or something else unforecasted cuts in and kills it entirely whie you may be lucky to get a few flashes out of that sucker.

And all the cloud cover does is make it more sticky and humid.

This story is a lot like thaat kind of situation.

BTW: You should read some of the other Manipulative Dumbledore fanfics that gets into questions such as Harry's mail being rerouted so he misses important Gringotts letters and Dumbledore making illegal withdraws.

Either you or someone royally screwed up. The only reason I'm reading this is because Harry is in Slytherin and Quirell got sacked instead of everything being the exact same timeline with different colours.

That is just a lame excuse for not having an imagination if you do the exact same timeline with different people because "I'm sticking to canon". JK Rowling gives half ass answers which doesn't really cover what people ask. Her most thoughtful answer seems to be *Dumbledore is gay* which shows to me her priorities.

Tolkien and CS Lewis would've had more logic and likely Harry would either have not been placed with the Dursley's or they would've been a regular family instead of a family being obsessed with normal to the point they are weird.

I am not saying this fic is bad. It depends if you like *arcade* or simulation* type fanfics.

Kinda like arcade and simulation racing games where Mario Kart is definitely Arcade and doesn't even try to pretend to be a simulator while Dirty Rally is more of a simulator then anything.

Ubisoft The Crew with or without (Wild Run) is a mix between the two.

This fanfic falls in line with arcade style where it's fast and quick but not much depth. If your into that that's great for a quick read.

I like how Harry now will make his own rules.

Oh and it's not unreasonable for Harry to run away. He did it with Aunt Marge even in the canon version.

Please explain why this got put into the Manipulative Dumbledore section? False advertising? NOT COOL MAN! (Thumbs nose up)

The Author unfortunately, intervened.

I hate canon Harry. He is too dopey and stupid. JK Rowling definitely shows her liberal side in this focusing so much on the Gryffindors vs Slytherin crap failing to see the bigger picture behind it all.

And that is why a lot of writers for good or bad use artistic license to fill in the gaps of Harry though sometimes they have Harry acting too smart for his age more like a 40 year old something Harry.

I wish Harry wasn't so dopey in this.