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alternatereality42 chapter 1 . 10/10/2016 Tribute name: Domitia Carrow Age: 17 Gender: female District: 2 Background: Butcher's daughter, used to be bullied at school ("used to" being the operative word), doesn't really have friends Description: Long, straight black hair in a high ponytail, black eyes, tan, clear complexion, tall Personality: solitary, indifferent Strengths: doesn't care about people at all Weaknesses: everyone, except her allies, wants to kill her Weapon(s) of choice: Anything with a blade, axes, spears, staffs, hand-to-hand Reaction to reaping: volunteered Fears: death Family: Mom (Victoria Carrow): Short, straight black hair, pale, black eyes, her daughter's personality; Dad (Dominic Carrow): Buzzed black hair, tan, blue eyes, caring Wants allies: is a Career Clothes: skintight black stuff District token: a piece of marble her dad found mining, to remind her to be strong Visitors: Dad: "Good luck, be strong." Friends: see background and personality Interested in romance: oh HELL no What will show to Gamemakers: see weapons of choice Interview strategy: hostile Other notes: none - Tribute name: Domitia Carrow Age: 17 Gender: female District: 2 Background: Butcher's daughter, used to be bullied at school ("used to" being the operative word), doesn't really have friends Description: Long, straight black hair in a high ponytail, black eyes, tan, clear complexion, tall Personality: solitary, indifferent Strengths: doesn't care about people at all Weaknesses: everyone, except her allies, wants to kill her Weapon(s) of choice: Anything with a blade, axes, spears, staffs, hand-to-hand Reaction to reaping: volunteered Fears: death Family: Mom (Victoria Carrow): Short, straight black hair, pale, black eyes, her daughter's personality; Dad (Dominic Carrow): Buzzed black hair, tan, blue eyes, caring Wants allies: is a Career Clothes: skintight black stuff District token: a piece of marble her dad found mining, to remind her to be strong Visitors: Dad: "Good luck, be strong." Friends: see background and personality Interested in romance: oh HELL no What will show to Gamemakers: see weapons of choice Interview strategy: hostile Other notes: none - Tribute name: Domitia Carrow Age: 17 Gender: female District: 2 Background: Butcher's daughter, used to be bullied at school ("used to" being the operative word), doesn't really have friends Description: Long, straight black hair in a high ponytail, black eyes, tan, clear complexion, tall Personality: solitary, indifferent Strengths: doesn't care about people at all Weaknesses: everyone, except her allies, wants to kill her Weapon(s) of choice: Anything with a blade, axes, spears, staffs, hand-to-hand Reaction to reaping: volunteered Fears: death Family: Mom (Victoria Carrow): Short, straight black hair, pale, black eyes, her daughter's personality; Dad (Dominic Carrow): Buzzed black hair, tan, blue eyes, caring Wants allies: is a Career Clothes: skintight black stuff District token: a piece of marble her dad found mining, to remind her to be strong Visitors: Dad: "Good luck, be strong." Friends: see background and personality Interested in romance: oh HELL no What will show to Gamemakers: see weapons of choice Interview strategy: hostile Other notes: none - Tribute name: Domitia Carrow Age: 17 Gender: female District: 2 Background: Butcher's daughter, used to be bullied at school ("used to" being the operative word), doesn't really have friends Description: Long, straight black hair in a high ponytail, black eyes, tan, clear complexion, tall Personality: solitary, indifferent Strengths: doesn't care about people at all Weaknesses: everyone, except her allies, wants to kill her Weapon(s) of choice: Anything with a blade, axes, spears, staffs, hand-to-hand Reaction to reaping: volunteered Fears: death Family: Mom (Victoria Carrow): Short, straight black hair, pale, black eyes, her daughter's personality; Dad (Dominic Carrow): Buzzed black hair, tan, blue eyes, caring Wants allies: is a Career Clothes: skintight black stuff District token: a piece of marble her dad found mining, to remind her to be strong Visitors: Dad: "Good luck, be strong." Friends: see background and personality Interested in romance: oh HELL no What will show to Gamemakers: see weapons of choice Interview strategy: hostile Other notes: none - |
icestarlight chapter 5 . 9/23/2010 Awesome update! Can't wait to read the next chapter in District 3! |
CloveNeedsaRealityCheck chapter 1 . 9/23/2010 This is my tribute - Name: Khol Hood Age: 13 District: 12 Background:Khol was quiet and meaningful in the beginning of her life and remained so throughout her childhood, not quite knowing who her friends were due to being told on to a peacekeeper by a close friend after she was seen scouraging around in peoples bins for any precious items she could present to her mother for her birthday, as she was far too young to earn money and her family was quite poor. Because she was only a child, Khol was not punished but did feel extremely betrayed after that. Khol doesn't like to speak about her younger brother after his death. He died from starvation when she was only seven years old. Her father was a miner and her mother had no occupation until money started failing them, when she started up a small shop in the social part of district twelve. Khol had one best friend, Astrix who was 14 when he was chosen in a previous reaping to compete in the hunger games. Astrix was brutally murdered though and did not return, Khol became depressed for a month then realised there was no use in weeping. Her wounds were just healing but since then has made a new friend, Dawn. Appearance/Description : Jet Black hair that falls in feathery waves (usually in a loose pony tail) to her waist. One-of-a-kind golden eyes, and a pale complexion. No Visible blemishes, except for a thin scar starting at her upper shin and finishing at her toe on her left leg from an accident that occured when she was quite young, so she has no idea how she got it. Personality : Khol is defensive and quiet by nature, but she's certanly not weak! She is kind and observant and always says the right things at the right times. She is Sweet and innocent, but has also got the ability to manipulate people. Her personality is deep and meaningful, also quite athletic and soft-hearted. But when it comes to it, Khol can kill to stay alive, that survival instinct is alive and well in her spirit. Strengths: She is extremely skilled with knives and could handle them from a very young age ( her father once owned a butcher shop, though she hated it, she still picked up the skills). She can also smooth-talk her way out of dangerouse situations. With a slight and petite frame (being quite undersized for her age) she is guite agile. Weaknesses: Although she tries to conceal it, Khol has a poor sense of right and wrong, leading her into the dangerous situations she smooth-talks her way out even though she tries to improve the way she percieves things, Khol cannot decides who her friends are of how to separate them from her enemies. Weapon of Choice: Knives (like I said before, her father used to own a butcher shop, before he went out of business) She can also use her ability to say the right things at the right times as a weapon. Rection to reaping : She was shocked at first, but then she realised she had to be strong for her family, so she tried to show no emotion as she walked on to the stage. She tried to keep her face as blank as possible and take it as it comes, because she knew everyone died eventually, and if she were to die in the arena, she would not die without trying to win. she wanted to give hope to her parents, because she knew they were taking it badly. Fears: People she cannot seem to figure out (like if they act tough and then do something completely soft hearted), She also fears what will happen to her family if she dies. She also has a fear of showing her personality to people in general, in case they spot her weakness. Family: she has amother, Milla, who is short and is an ollder version of Khol, except she has grey eyes and is larger than life. she also has a father, Jax, who is tall(ish) with sandy blonde hair and piercing golden eyes. He is more surly and docile, (so Khol takes more after him in personality). she had a little brother, Danni, who was sweet and caring but later died of starvation when he was three. Allies: she wants someone who is smart, but not smart enough to find her weaknesses and is also strong, but not too strong, and they must be loyal and trustworthy. If no one is like that, Khol will just go solo. Reaping Outfit: A dress of coffee coloured cloth, that ends just above her knees and had two white buttons down the front, with two pockets (one on each side) and straps that are plain and cross over at the back. Token: A feather of a wild duck that her brother found the day he died, attatched to a thin silver chain she likes to hang from her neck, close to her heart. Visitors: First her mother, who runs in to the room and gushes - "Oh honey, I am so sorry, I should never have let you take those extra tesserae, if I was younger I would've volunteered, but how could I?..." Khol patted her mother on the back and gives her a great hug. "Mum.." she says "Please don't cry, I'll make it back, I swear, I need to support you guys, in the meantime, just stay strong, for me, okay?" Her father enters, looking quiet and miserable. "Daddy!" she runs over to him and gives him a hug. "You know what I'm going to say, look after mum, and support her the best you can, I'm coming back," He nods and says " I hope, Khol, you've always been strong, just play your cards right and stick to what your gut tells you, come out fighting." Khol nods "I love you both, stay stong...please," they share one more embrace before her mother pulls out the duck feather. "I..I want you to wear this, remember when Danni gave it to you?" Tears well in her eyes. "It will make you strong, like were going to be, waiting for you to come home...and you'll always have a piece of our family, wherever you go," "Mom.." Khol says quietly, "I think this is what I'll need...to face it..." there was no need for anymore words as they sat, cradling their only child. "I love you!" Khol cries again as they're ushered out of the room. Dawn enters. "Khol!" she rushes over to Khol's side. "I want you to know that I'll always think of you, and that if- when you get back, we will be forever thankful, I give you my love, Danni's love,and Astrix's love." Khol knew this was hard for dawn. "I would have volunteered, but my family, they would never have been the same." Khol unterstood. "Dawn, you have always beed a good friend, and I am forever grateful." Dawn gives her one final squeeze before she leaves. Interested in romance: Khol has never really thought about it, but ideally, they would be similar to her and will never try to hurt her. what she will show to the game makers: Khol would thow knives to a certain extent, then show how she can run and hide, even how she canuse her opponents strengths against them. Interview Strategy: She will be mature, she will say how she will do everything in her power to get back to family and that she loves them to pieces. She will try very hard not to give away too much about herself, but instead she that she is just a chil and that she would be ever so grateful for support, and that she is strong mentally if not physically. |
The Lady Cloudy chapter 5 . 9/23/2010 That was a great chapter and I'm so excited for te rest of the reapings! Please Update Soon! -Cloudy |
potterlockedintheshire chapter 5 . 9/23/2010 Nice chapter :) I liked jechts part alot, and I'm really glad you wrote each person's part at two different times in the story so it's not repetative. |
Junkyardgirl45 chapter 3 . 9/23/2010 I CAN'T ACCESS MY ACCOUNT! This will have to do. I really loved Daphine and Wyatt, especially how you've written them. I hope you can do the same for Jasleen! |
When Midnight Strikes chapter 3 . 8/31/2010 I'm really excited! You portaied Day perfectly! I have to say THANK YOU again! |
YouDon'tNeedToKnowWhoIAm chapter 4 . 8/31/2010 That's actually a pretty good idea there, teamawesome. I will wait for a new chapter when it is done, because I loved Daphine and Wyatt. |
Ducktape980 chapter 2 . 8/30/2010 Tribute name: Fallon Jamesen Age: 15 Gender: male District: 11 Background: his dad works in the orchards and fields, so they're pretty poor Description: about 5ft 7", blonde hair thats often dirty from working, and a rather muscular build Personality: kind, tough, mostly the strong and silent type, except he does talk. Can be quiet funny once you get to know him, but he's pretty reserved around strangers Strengths: his strength, great eyesight, and if allied, a bit protective, depending on the person Weaknesses: doesn't have great aim for long range weapons like bows/arrows or throwing knives, and is a bit forgetful at times Weapon(s) of choice: a sword/knife or a spear Reaction to reaping: when his name is called, he is startled a little at first, then masks it as he stands up and walks up to the stage gruffly, no smiles, and stands on stage with his arms crossed (he has quite a few slips in the jar with his name on it, like 17 or so) Fears: being trapped, or buried alive in an avalanche of some sort and dying under its pressure Family: his dad has green eyes and brown hair thats long and shaggy, and his mom had beautiful blonde hair and blue eyes, but she died due to a tracker jacker attack in the orchard a few years ago, and he has a few siblings, a little brother and sister, who are twins, that are about 7 years old. The whole family is loving and caring, but not always able to spend time together as a family. The younger kids have to come home to an empty house after school because everyone is still at work Allies?: sure, if they can withstand his quietness and gruffness, like maybe the character i sent in earlier, Sara Mayson, because they'd make a good pair, but you don't have to, it's you story Clothes: for reaping, a red sleeveless shirt, and a pair of black pants. For HG a dark green, tight fitting, long sleeved shirt and plain worn jeans District token: a small silver apple tree shaped pin Visitors: just his dad and little sibs, saying "we love you! Be strong and don't give up until the end!" Friends: maybe some of the other tributes, but otherwise, just about everyone from the district knows him and is his friends Romance: sure, maybe, why not. How about Sara Mayson? (i know i said she'd make a good ally, so i was just putting this out there too) What to show to Gamemakers: his awesome strength and close combat skills Interview strategy: funny, likeable Other: none for him, but i wanted to change the Interview Strategy for Sara: determined, focused, and maybe a couple funny moments. THANKS FOR ACCEPTING SARA! |
imaginingmary chapter 3 . 8/30/2010 Great Chapter! The sneek was great too! -HGN |
Ducktape980 chapter 4 . 8/30/2010 just to make you day, and tell you my opinion: the arena sounds great, full of exciting places! CANT WAIT! |
Baraqi chapter 4 . 8/30/2010 Tribute Name: Tamarack "Tam" Caldera Age: 16 Gender: Male District: 6, or possibly 5 Background: Tam is the oldest child of Basil and Jasmine Caldera, and is a District boy through and through. He started working in the lab when he was 12, helping develop new breeding techniques. He makes enough money to contribute to his parents, and the Caldera family has been able to make an okay living over the years. Description: He has neatly brushed black hair which appears to have been amateurishly cut at the ends, leading to Tam's hair being uneven. His eyes are dark brown like his fathers, and always appear to be peaking out at you from behind a pair of rimless glasses. Tam has a short, skinny stature, standing at only about 5'4''. His skin is pale from years of lab work, and always is smudged by one chemical or another. His nose is covered by a bridge of freckles, and he has a slightly crocked smile. Personality: Tam is a cheerful and friendly person, often striking up conversations with people he doesn't know yet. While some in his district might find he annoying, Tam tries to ignore them. He's an intelligent boy who loves books and working in the lab, and is eager for praise from others. Tam is more of a follower than a leader, and his willing to put the group's interests above his own. Strengths: Tam is good at finding plants to eat a use for healing, as well as traps and snares. He can think on his feet and is a good planner. Tam is able to make items and alliances quickly. Weaknesses (please no invincible tributes; have at least a few weaknesses): Having spent most of his life indoors, Tam can't hunt or fish. He has never used a weapon before, and is too quick to make alliances. His trusting nature may earn him his death. Weapon(s) of choice: Bombs, small explosives, knives Reaction to reaping: He walks up quietly and tries to appear as positive as he can. Inside, he's worried for himself and his family. Fears: Death, drowning, wild animals, someone he cares about dying Family (personality and appearance): Basil Caldera: Tam's father, a serious man who despite his dour appearance really does care about his family. He's a tall, middle-aged man with graying black hair and sharp dark brown eyes. Jasmine Caldera: A daydreamer, unlike her husband, who is very skilled at finding medical plants for the district. She is always upbeat, and works very hard to ensure her family is able to get by. Her hair is an ashy brown, and she has calm blue eyes. Carob Caldera: Tam's little brother, he is still one year away from being eligible for the reaping. He is a cheerful young boy, with dark brown hair and light blue eyes. The rest of the family spoils Carob a bit. Wants allies (if so what type Tam would be eager to form a non-career alliance. His favored allies would be quick thinking people who don't want to kill. Clothes: A stained white lab coat with his name on a patch on the right side. Under that, he wears a light cotton shirt and dark black pants. Tam's shoes are black and show signs of wear and tear. District token: A small, empty glass bottle on a silver chain he received for his mother. Visitors/ what they say: Tam's family comes to see him, along with his best friends, Kelvin and Patera. They offer their reassurances. His lab director, Nadir Parsec, demands that Tam makes it back alive. Friends (personality and appearance) if none why: Kelvin Millibar: A quiet bookish boy. He has dark black eyes and hair, and is rather tall. Patera Albedo: An extremely energetic girl who is always moving. She's of medium height, with light brown hair and blue eyes. Interested in Romance (if so what's ideal partner like): Sure. A kind person who genuinely likes him. What will show to Gamemakers: His ability to make explosives Interview strategy: Tam appears quiet and humble, but does give a hint that he isn't just going to roll over and die. |
Magick Tricks chapter 1 . 8/30/2010 I think I may like this, and do you mind if I send my Tribute's application to you via private message? |
runegod2.0 chapter 2 . 8/28/2010 Tribute Name: Tranzar Ruben Age: 16 Gender: Male District: 7 Background: Tranzar is a orphan child at birth in district 7. At the age of six he was adopted by his foster parents. He later left due to his foster parents not caring about him to live in his parent's old abandoned house at the poor district area where he found old clothes and an old necklace with a engraved fang his mother used to wear which he wears as a good luck charm. Because he lives by himself, he learned to lie, truth few to non people, not follow the rules, how to fight to get what he wants which is how he got his scar, and say whats he wants to say when he wants to. There he basic skills to get by and steal like knot tying for braking in, how to use knives, how to start fires to get past the cold night, camo use for helped creaping, and agility and dexterity skills comes natural to him. At the of 13 fell in love and went into a Relationship with another thief girl of the same age named Namu Lins who he met at school that he lost to a fire the following year which was started by the capitol due to signs of rebel. The lost of Namu broke him causing him to mistake most girls his age to somewhat have some quality that's reminds him of namu, causing him to gain stud quality, while at the same time draining him of all feeling while at the same time forcing him into his stud play to the crowd personality. Description: charming,agile,always wears a necklace,scar going doing his forehead, is skiny to the point that's he's thin but not starved, green eyes, blood red emo hair. Personality: Backstabing,flirty,lier,dirty mouth,cocky,back talking but surprisely very smart and civil. Strengths: Agility,dexterity,knots,fires,camo,blades and won't feel bad about killing, stealing, or lying. Weaknesses: Strength,easily gets sick,will make a path, and spears. Weapons of choice: Anything bladed. mainly knifes and sometimes axes. Reaction to reaping: Careless but on the inside he's glad life stop trying to mess with him and kill him already. Fears: he can sometimes get claustrophobic. Family: non, there all dead. wants allies: He'll team up with anyone who came pull there own weight, just do think he won't leave. Clothes: High grade dark blue dress short and black pants. District Token: His necklace. Friends: Non, he never really talked to anyone. Interested in Romance: he may or may not want one(atleast he'll flirt abit), all he cares about is that the girl's not a snob. What will show to Gamemakers: He'll try to show off his speed and god-like knife skill. Interview strategy: Just try to keep your cool,stay,calm,play to the crowd, and overall just not care(he really doesn't). Other notes: he's an atheist. |
PIXARFAN chapter 1 . 8/28/2010 I messed up on reaction to reaping and district token for Oriana Adheal. Reaction to Reaping: When her name was called she had a face of disbelief and horror. She stood their frozen like ice. When her name was pronounced once again she reluctantly went up the stage. Seeing the mixed reactions of the different mixture of faces. No sight of their siblings. District token: Gold chain necklace with the letter "O" in gold on it. |