Amazing... I wish there was so much more to read. It feels like I personally know the characters you have created. I so want to know what happens to them ahead...

Wow! I loved this. I had not expected this to be this good, but I am pleasantly surprised. I wish there was much more... What about Phila and her mate? Were they ever romantically involved? Thanks for writing this! I can't wait to read Phil's version of the story...

Great story! I loved it so much. I am so happy Leah got her happy ending!

I absolutely love this story, Leah has her flaws but you explain her struggles in a way that makes them more relatable.
Which is really weird for me because I hated twilight and thought Bella was one of the weakest female characters in all of existance.
ANYWAY, just wanted to say that this was great and I hope you right more fanfiction soon.

This is a really interesting story. Sometimes, however, you seem to get off track with leah's thoughts and while it's interesting, it's also distracting. If you take a glancing view down chapter 2, you'll notice that you often have a couple words of conversation from a character, then two to three paragraphs of thought, often unrelated to the dialogue, before the next character says a few words - and repeat.
It makes the story very slow and at least three times I had to skip back to the last of the dialogue to remember what was going on.

so cool loved

I love the ending to this chapter. The part where she gives that last little bit of her trust.

I started reading this story when I was going through a tough time in my life. There was somethung in this book, something in the way that you wrote, something in the way I pictured the characters, that touched my heart. This book gave me company when I was lonely, when I was sad and even when I was happy. I fell in love with this story, with its characters, with Phil and his sexy develishness with Leah's sarcastic demeanor. Please, Please, Please continue writing! Please!

I really love your story

Fluffy but steamy very nice work

Great start! You got Leah's character down really good! Moving onto the next chapter. Cannot wait to hear more about the new person.

I had forgotten how much fun Phil's version of the story is. I have to admit it is a lot darker than Leah's. She really did see him as a knight in shinning armor, but then I think that is what she needed at the time. Later on he started letting her see the darker layers of him.

Please update! I love and miss your stories so much.

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Please update-I miss this story!