Liked this-the dialogue, action-but I don't know Invader Zim from Shakespeare, so I don't know the characters! Thanks for calling my "Good Old Boy" one of your favorites-it was the first story I'd written in 55 years...

this seems to be good,

i give you three derps.

i have the scale of those derps on my profile if you don't get it.

Gush signing off

Thanks for the review!

Your story is pretty good as well. I'm actually really curious to see who the mysterious lady is. Also, it's interesting how you made Tak a defect, too. Zim is always the one considered a defect.

Hey, this is pretty good! this story isn't bad at all, you don't give yourself enough credit. the idea and plot itself sounds cool and original, just clean up the writing style and it would be perfect!

P.S. thanks for reviewing my story. it's my first one too. i was so nervous people would hate it, but i was so happy when i read your review. thnx again!

Go ahead and continue this, what have you got to lose? More writing more experience improving your writing style. There a few minor errors, but they don't detract from the story as a whole. It would just make it easier to read (ie. Starting a new paragraph when different people talk, etc.). Good job and keep writing!

P.S. Heh, my iPod hates me so I can't Log in on it. :P

I say continue on!

I want to point out a few mistakes here and there but nothing big

Hmm, you should continue! BTW, why is this rated M? Just wondering...

Oh, and thanks for the fav on my story! :D