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Amazing storyline, love how you worked certain canon points in while keeping a smooth storyline. This is the first story where I have read that Peter was not the Captain and I wish it was explained earlier but once I got to the explanation it made sense. Hope to see this continued or a second part added. Just in all a lovely and enjoyable story, that leaves me craving more.

Please update ASAP

Love the story cant wait for more

plz update

this was fantastic please finish it sometime

UPDATE PLEASE

wow so both of the ladies have fear. Hurt well Bella feels hurt and that is understandable right. Just hopefully nothing happens to them neither of the couples or the single ones right. I just hope that they can get this war over with and win it.

Tanya got what was coming to her. She was warned by the Major, now she wouldn't listen to him so Bella took it into her own matter and this is good to show her who was who. I sure hope she has learned her lesson now.

I thought this chapter was awesome. With Char back, and with her children sweet right. So now Jasper wants to change Bella sooner, I wonder what Bella would think and say to all of that right.

this was an awesome chapter as well. Wow Tanya needs to give it up and accept Bella back into the Cullen's life. How was Bella to know that Edward was going to get himself killed right. Also how did she know that Alice was on all and everything that has happened to Bella. I can't wait to read more chapters of this awesome story. Like I said before this is the second or third time reading this.

this was a good chapter as well. I'm glad that Emmett is willing to help Bella and Jasper. I sure do hope that she does heal within right

This was a good chapter I thought. Wow what a good dream, but what a way to be woken by said dream. I do hope she gets healed soon, and gain a little weight back.

wow the truth came out on what Alice did and how she felt about Bella, and to keep mates away if death isn't it. But Jasper has better plans and this is good. So Alice was using another guy not good at all. Poor Ethan getting toyed by Alice.

wow this was another good chapter. So they now know that Bella is half vampire, this is interesting I think, well with all of the vampire venom in her and then being sucked out.