Reviews for Retrieval
meburleson chapter 7 . 5/16/2015
Perfect way to end this! Love it! I'm so glad Annie went to see Diane. Although I do wish Diane was allowed to know Jake is alive and well. But I do understand Auggie's desire and need for her not to. I love how perfectly you've integrated Jake as Auggie. It is awesome! I also like that Auggie remain different from Jake. The transition from one character to the other is seemless. I wish there was more to read. But that's where my story will come in to place. Although, mine will be quite different. I hope you'll read it when it's it up.
meburleson chapter 6 . 5/16/2015
Holy freakin $'! What just happened? Did Annie just shoot Auggie? And did Auggie just kill Durate? And where the freak is Dumont? I only have one more chapter.
meburleson chapter 5 . 5/16/2015
Crap! How'd Dumont find them? Did Duarte help him? I'm still suspicious of him, but I just don't want to believe he could be bad. But man what's in store for Auggie now? What will Annie do to help him. Maybe Dumont will inject the nanites into himself and they reject him? Ahhh! must read more!
meburleson chapter 4 . 5/16/2015
Wow, awesome chapter! I totally don't blame Annie for being mad at Auggie. It's super weird to think of them as the same person and yet I can't wait to write my own story telling a very similar story. Although, as I read yours, I see that mine will be quite different.

I'm quite fascinated with this story. I'm weary of Durate, I'm worried he will end up being in cohorts with Dumont. I hope he isn't though.
meburleson chapter 3 . 5/16/2015
Wow! What an escape these three just did. I'm super excited to get more explanation to everything going on. I have an idea that I know a lot of the explanation already, but I'm curious to see if it matches what I expect. I hope you surprise me though!
meburleson chapter 2 . 5/16/2015
Durate a double agent working with Dumont?! What? Seriously don't believe it! And what do they want with Annie? I'm so fascinated to know what happens next! I mean, how'd Auggie get there? And more importantly, why is he there and how did he know where Annie was? I can't wait to read the next chapter to get answers to my questions!
meburleson chapter 1 . 5/16/2015
I just finished watching Jake 2.0 yesterday, a fan of Chris Gorham told me about the show and I watched it. I told her about a fanfiction story I thought of crossing over Covert Affairs and Jake 2.0. As we were discussing it, she told me about this crossover. (I'm also a HUGE Covert Affairs fan.). I'm enjoying how this has started so far. I'm quite interested to see what you'll do with it. Auggie is being quite mysterious right now. I'm curious to see what's happened to Annie and Durate. Doesn't seem like anything good, thats for sure.
YoreReader chapter 7 . 8/7/2014
Whew!

That was some adventure, alright. I'm glad they all made it out alive.

There's just the little matter of Dumont still out and about, though. Even if Auggie and Annie get the Russians on his tail, there is that chance that he'll evade capture again. And make their lives hell again. Let me at him. I want to finish him off.

So where Jake Foley's life ended, Auggie Anderson's life began. Pretty well tied up at the end there. Where it left off can now follow the show.

Excellent writing! Love it. I enjoyed that a lot. Thank you for sharing this story with us.
YoreReader chapter 6 . 8/7/2014
NOOO!

I'm going to tear Dumont limb from limb. Then I'm going to stomp on his carcass and feed it to the vultures. What did he do to Auggie?

And did Annie just shoot him?
YoreReader chapter 4 . 8/7/2014
That's a lot to take in. It's a wonder Annie's not freaking out more. But I suppose there's truth in what she said, it's difficult to stay mad at Auggie.

But now she knows. How is this going to affect their relationship moving forward?

And was Auggie being honest when he told Annie why she was promoted so quickly?
YoreReader chapter 3 . 8/7/2014
Now I'm getting it!

I sort of have an idea what Jake 2.0 is about - that's why I was interested in watching it in the first place because the storyline intrigued me. I love sci-fi stuff.

So Auggie is Jake Foley. And he was involved in the program. And it looks like all that mojo takes a toll on him. I hope he's okay.
YoreReader chapter 2 . 8/7/2014
Okay. Now I'm really bummed that I haven't watched Jake 2.0. I have no idea what's going on!

When I heard Auggie had called in sick, I had my suspicions. This proves me right. He knows something of what's going on. But what does he know? Was he involved in whatever program they were talking about?

Your storytelling abilities is topnotch. The way you describe the surroundings, the characters' actions and thoughts plus, the fast-paced scenes drive me to the edge of my seat. I am thoroughly enjoying myself.

Now on to escape, right?
YoreReader chapter 1 . 8/7/2014
Wow! I'm caught in the storyline already. It looks to be an awesome adventure. I'm in.

CIA and NSA don't mix, huh? Who has Annie and Agent Duarte? Is it whoever who retrieved the intel? Are they in danger?

And what is up with Auggie? He seems to know Director Beckett because he made sure he was out of his office when Annie gave her the tour and same with Agent Duarte because he disguised his voice on the phone while they were talking.

Jake 2.0 has been on my list to of shows to watch ever since. I have to make a point to watch it soon.
LyraLollygagger chapter 7 . 11/24/2013
I started watching Covert Affairs because of Christopher Gorham in Jake 2.0, so I am pleasantly surprised to find a story that combines both shows (and cleverly done, I might add)! All of the characters were really well written and realistic, which made reading your story very much like watching both shows! Also, I loved Annie's thoughts throughout the story! Having her point of view allowed the smaller pieces of the story to come together, and helped to put me (the reader) in her shoes (and on the edge of my seat just a little bit more!)

It was really, really well written and I enjoyed reading it! Thank you for sharing! :-)
Delendaest chapter 7 . 11/27/2012
That was a perfect last line.
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