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That was perfect.

Holy Showzer.

That was freaking amazing.

I don't even know how you DO that!

I FELT like Ariadne. Like I was the one who was reluctantly stripping off her scarves and jackets and unconsciously sliding up her skirt to get just a touch of relief from the heat. Holy cow, that was awesome.

I could imagine everything so perfectly. Eames' scruff cheek, his focus despite the heat, and his glee at the game he played with little bit.

I felt even more overpowered by the story when he referred to her as "little bit" because that's one of my nicknames! O_O Eames, you bloody amazing British man, you are going to be the death of me.

Also, one of my favorite lines: How the men could stand it in their suits, she didn't know.

Men in suits are amazing. They just are. There should be a day when all men are forced to wear suits and when the retire in the evening, they should all undo their cuffs and push up their sleeves to the elbows. Just sayin'. ;]

You must write more. Seriously. You have to. I love this. You have been added to my favorites bookmark.

I really liked this! I think you did a great job with this fic! I thought the concept was very interesting, and I would love to see more EamesAriadne from you! Keep up the amazing work!

I hope you do continue it. theres hardly any stories except one shote. Loved this please update :)

I love your use of imagery in this piece; I feel like I'm really there with Ariadne, sweltering away in the South African heat while trying to keep my head straight concerning an irresistible cad. Great job with this; I love this pairing and they get so little love in the fandom. Thanks for writing.

the heat? eames and ariadne, who are you kidding?

lol.

great job on this one.

This should have more reviews! Very well-written and very hot indeed! Bravo!

Loved it. They way you wrote and described things was brilliant.

Interesting chemistry between them, and I love that you used Mombasa as the setting!

Oh *sigh*. I loved this. Makes me want to squeal. :)

This was an enjoyable piece to read. C: You asked for some critiques regarding it, and I felt obliged to leave just one.

Mombassa, while certainly located in Kenya, Africa, is in all reality a coastal location, just off the boarder of Tansania. The temperature in these coastal locations of the African continent are more prone to tropic climates.

In honesty, most people aren't familiar with such geography and won't know the difference, but in actuality, Mombassa usually maintains average temperatures of 80 degrees - making it fairly comfortable weather.

Your intent was to use extreme weather to alter the attitudes, I understand the significance of that, I just wanted to inform of the opposition it faced concerning the region.

I love it. Eames is so hot. i hope you update soon.

I love it. Please update soon.

Awe I love them together! Are you going to write more? Please? :)