This was awesome, your writing is solid! Thanks for posting!

This is so beautifully written!

AMEN

Beautiful and amazing! I live this couple!

Bravo ! I love this story.

OH , I LOVE THIS STORY !

This was absolutely beautiful!

You did a fabulous job writing this. Its one of the best written pieces I have had the pleasure of reading.

As a child who was born to a family of Asia/Africa parents, let me tell this is poetry! Love is the most beautiful thing in the world, the colour of your skin shouldn't matter at all!
Now I want a Ninja BF like Raizo too, gotta check out :-)

One day I hope I will feel like that too and find someone worthy of the attention...

Loved it. Love the coupling and wish I had more story for them.

That was FANTASTIC! I love Ninja Assassin! It is one of my favorite movies and this story goes with it perfectly! So great. And cool to see from Mika's perspective. Loved it. Great job! Instant favorite!

this was amazingly intimate and sweet. you captured a very quiet moment and made it very powerful. i love your choice of words, her thoughts, and the movements of her hands over him. i LOVED when he woke up and kissed her and pulled her close. how sweet!

this was just really well written. so glad you sent me to read this gem. so now i'm really looking forward to when you post that story we talked about.

Wow this was amazing, this makes me wish that in the movie they showed more of their relationship developing. You did a fantastic job.

That was simply beautiful