J'aime mais je suis heureux que vous avez repris le film .

Really well written. Nice story.

you know the Linkin Park songs really go with your story.

I like this Movie 9 re-write. You changed some of the actions but kept the same basic plot. I wanna find out what happens to Zangya so a sequel would be nice...

OFBT evolved

a sequel is a very good idea, your written is very well done

Absolutely SWEET! I loved every second of it. Although, I haven't seen the Bojack movie, I did realize that this was following a movie story line when you described what Krillen saw as his opponent. This makes me want to see it even more! This story was great, and extremely well written! Keep up the good work! See ya!

That was Movie 9... and it was ...GREAT!

read on

this is pretty good. i liked it alot,so please continue.

Finally finished. Sorry it tok me so long, but ya know, with school and writing, well, time.

But anyway, I loved this fic. Everyone was perfectly in character, which is ultra rare in a fic anymore. I loved the writing style as well.

Well, it's time for me to move on. Gotta go read some more of your fics, Sh33p, cuz I loved this.

Bai now.

The Rev.

*dancing around waving a "Go Gohan!" flag* Yeah Gohan! You show that evil b******* who's cool! WOOHOO! _

This is very good, very well written. The only problem is, it's too long for me to stay on the net and read :). I'll just have to save it to Word and read it on my own time, then leave a review at the end. But this was very good, loved it. Now for the rest...

The Rev.

Good. Very good. And also (as always), well written. I like how you incorporated some Linkin Park song into each chapter, most damn song fics these days have some kind of N*suck song in them *gags* Anyhoo, I wish I could write fight scenes like...damn. Yeah, as I said before, very good. I'm surprised this fic didn't get more reviews than this... *goes off to read the other fics in the Hybrid Theory series*

~Flirtatious Flamingo~

Hey Sh33p ::laughs:: I really enjoyed this fic man it rocked all the way..and what do you know..It's not a sad ending...

Love stacy

P.S Continue making stories...You have talent :)

VERY DAMN GOOD! U noticed how Linkin pArk goes with dbz too huh? Should have had In the End though also. I'm obssessed with Linkin Park and DBZ and this was absolutely perfect

It starts with

one thing/i dontknow why

it doesnt even matter how hard you try

keep that in mind/i designed this rhyme

to explain in due time

All i know

time is a valuable thing

watch it fly by as the pendulum swings

watch it count down to the end of the day

The clock ticks life away

its so unreal

didn't look out below

watch the time go right out the window

trying to hold on /but didnt even know

wasted it all just to

watch it go

i kept everything inside and even though i tried/it all fell apart

what it meant to me will evetually/ be a memory/of a time when

I tried so hard

and got so far

But in the end

It doesn't even matter

I had to fall

to lose it all

But in the end

it doesn't even matter

One thing/i don't know why

Doesn't even matter how hard you try

Keep that in mind i designed this rhyme

To remind myself How

I tried so hard

in spite of the way you were mocking me

actin like i was part of your property

Remembering all the times you fought with/ me/I'm surprised

it got so (far)

Things aren't the way they were before

you wouldn't even reconize me anymore

Not that you knew me back then

But it all comes back to me

In the end

You kept everything inside and even though i tried/it all fell apart

What it meant to me/will eventually/be a memory/of a time when i

Tried so hard

and got so far

but in the end

It doesnt even matter

i had to fall

to lose it all

But in the end

It doesn't even matter

I put my trust in you

pushed as far as i can go

For all this

theres only one thing you should know

I put my trust in you

pushed as far as i can go

For all this

theres only one thing you should know

I tried so hard

and got so far

but in the end

it doesn't even matter

i had to fall to lose it all

But in the end it doesn't even matter

I just had to do that.