| Reviews for Water: Twist of Fate |
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Guest chapter 1 . 8/12 This fix starts exactly how I imagine myself turning up in any fictional universe, just straight up falling out of the sky. |
Guest chapter 38 . 7/11 Binge read this. Looking forward to binge reading the next one. |
GemThest chapter 11 . 6/20 You missed a couple instances of Maya’s name here, too. :) I think I can tell there have been edits - this whole chapter flowed so well and there seemed to be more meaning to their conversations than I remember. |
GemThest chapter 10 . 6/20 Hey girl! I’m rereading your story because I’m finally emotionally ready to tackle book three. I wanted to let you know that I noticed the last two times you mention Maya, you still have the Matya spelling. A quick CTRL-F should find them for you. I’m so excited to experience this all again and dig into your new chapters! I hope you’re weathering this insane pandemic that’s going on! |
Daladakea2 chapter 1 . 5/29 Awesome first chapter! Love your portrayal of the journey between worlds. I assume the spirits have something to do with this? Also, in regard to your author's note : I love that song! |
SkyBridges chapter 1 . 5/11 You ever get back into an old fandom and remember reading certain fics that made you so happy back in the day and that just really stuck in your mind, and so you go searching for them again for a reread? That’s me rn. Honestly I wasted quite a bit of time looking for this story in the wrong places, since it’s been so long since I read it I couldn’t remember precisely. I’m looking forward to going through this again! This fic feels as nostalgic as the show itself to me. Thank you for posting this and keeping it up to allow me to have my fond reminiscing! I don’t doubt that I’ll be back again someday, even if it’s another couple years. |
TheWiseQueen chapter 38 . 5/5 Sooo sooo good. Loved every second! |
TheWiseQueen chapter 28 . 5/5 You are an amazing writer and I can't wait to finish this. I am so so sorry for not stopping to review any of the previous chapters I just haven''t been able to stop reading! This is soooo good. I actually feel like I am obsessed with this story! I love the song safe and sound and I wanted to imagine the scene of Dakota singing as much as possible in a sort of asian inspired style so I searched youtube and found this - "Safe & Sound" Bei Bei Jett Kwong Kelly - and imagined that as Dakota and Jee coming in. I don't know if the Guzheng instrument they are playing is even remotely like the Pipa but I think it is one of the only ones with vocals and a Japanese or Chinese instrument. Anyway, check it out if you feel like it! :) I will try to post more reviews as I read along but I also don't want to spam your inbox... however - this story needs way more attention! P.S I usually try to leave a more constructive and thought out review but I am just giddy with this fic and have lost all sense of my normal. |
LuffyLover chapter 26 . 5/3 I have to say, just before starting this fic I read “Reluctant Hero”, and I love how totally different your versions of the Pirates are! Your additions to the canon world are fantastic and I’m really enjoying it! |
LuffyLover chapter 15 . 5/2 Psst. You missed a couple Matyas in this chapter, right at the very endalso, sorry this is my first review, but I’m loving it so far! |
Bellalovecake chapter 18 . 4/11 1) Caring girl who lost her footing. 2) We care about each other but we won't acknowledged it and that can be stupid. I have been living the story~ |
Spanish Napolean chapter 38 . 4/3 I don't know what usually goes in reviews but this story was awesome! I love how you were able to create such genuine interactions between Dakota and all of the other characters. I can easily picture her being in the actual show because of how well you wrote all of the characters interactions. You found/created a great spot for Dakota to exist as a new character in this plot. Before I saw that you had sequels to this story, I was super bummed to see how long it had been since you updated Looking forward to reading the next two! |
legosx99 chapter 37 . 3/21 BONK |
Nyac Silver Fang chapter 38 . 1/13 This is a awesome story can't wait to read the next one |
SuzyQBeats chapter 38 . 12/2/2019 I really just read everything over the night...OMG, this story was awesome! |