This is so good and so funny:). Could you maybe do a story in which Chloe tells her dad that she and Oliver are married? Well done:)

Love this story! Your Gabe Sullivan is awesome!

Ahahahahahah! Rotflmfao! Loved it! :)

I like this is there a sequel?

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA! That was absolutely hilarious at the end! I love that Ollie was so calm yet uncomfortable. Thanks for the ficlet! :)

this is so adorable.

Lol, I feel bad for Oliver and I actually expected him to be able to charm his way out of this one, or at least be able to take it better! Oh well, hope everything ends well for these two anyway.

Oh! Gabe is so evil. I loved that he felt nervous and completely weirded out. lol. We don't see that often enough. Hmmmm...are you planning on making a sequel to this piece. Or another chapter really. This feels like it has potential for one more to wrap it up. What do you think? Anywho...I loved it and though it was really cute and embarrassing. lol. Ciao.

ha ha ha ha that chapter was hilarious. The wrath of sullivans father intimidates good ole ollie. its funny to read. update soon... :)

Thank you so much for continuing this! Ah, this is just fantastic!

So, does this mean the story is officially a multi-chap, or is this it? 'Cause, I kinda think you need another chapter ... or two ... or maybe three ... hint hint! ;D

~falls over laughing~ lol that was great! I am so glad you wrote a second chapter. ~hands you a big plate of cookies for you and your muse~

I would love to read an other chapter of this. But I am also content with it like this.

I really like reading your writeing.

this is good. could you do a short on just of general and chloe

That was adorable! Too hilarious, I nearly peed myself :)

I like Gabe, he's always come a cross as a doting loving Dad, with a quirky sense of humor and a little goofy. A little like my Dad. He tried the intimidation route too. But it didn't work on my now hubby. :D But was very gracious and indulgent about it. It didn't even faze him when my Dad 'accidentally' dropped a car diff on him, and left him for a minute while he tried to figure out how to get the wench to work.

i'm glad you decided to continue this... now what was oliver going to say?