Reviews for Light Outside
Guest chapter 17 . 5/4
Only missing Sawyer getting a baby sibling

I like that this wasn't the predictable boring S5 fic. I wish you wrote more here. Felt real and you wrapped up the Lindsay parts well. I love their three moments and her trip to visit Lucas during his signing!
Guest chapter 17 . 5/4
One of the best "last" chapters I wish it lasted over a few more chapters!
Jayjayha chapter 2 . 12/27/2019
I think if she said a year he wouldn't have taken it as rejection or left. truth. it was the disappointing way she reacted to the ring and what she did NOT say. Someday is different than a year. Someday is something you say to someone you just started with not to someone who you have a long history with. Sure he shouldn't have left but he was hurt by her reaction. I honestly think she was immature in her reaction.

This was a really creative story I enjoyed I think both played a part in losing and then reuniting.
oncetree hill chapter 2 . 5/5/2013
O.K, I'm just not as forgiving as most Leyton shippers, because Luke seems to get off scott free, not pun intended for his bad behaviour. But this,,,,,

""So Peyton tells you to wait for her for just one year and you throw a tantrum because you didn't get your own way? Does that not show just how unprepared you were for marriage in the first place?"
and this,,,,

""Yeah you are. Because you're Lucas Scott and what does Lucas Scott do? Fall into another relationship because he can't get what he wants when he wants it."

That nails him down to a tee. Thanks for noticing and not letting him get off scott free. That's always bothered the hell out of me, to a point where I've wanted better for Peyton. I would have been happy if that had been Julian. Lucky Brooke.
Guest chapter 2 . 5/5/2013
wow, Lucas Scott sure is one self-aborbed, self centerd Jackass isn't he? Couldn't he at least wait until an injured and battered ex has had a little time to recover before picking a fight with her? What a #$%.
Guest chapter 17 . 10/12/2011
The ending of this chapter was amazing. I have enjoyed reading this story.
Zoe Marie888 chapter 11 . 8/24/2011
'"Dad! I made her mad!"' easily one of the best line in this chapter. I totally made me giggle, and I could just hear Jamie saying those words. Brilliant
LPlover chapter 5 . 10/8/2010
The Karen and Lucas talked had me in tears, beautifully heartbreaking.
LPlover chapter 2 . 10/8/2010
OMG how could i not read this story before this is so good!
inspiration.for.more chapter 1 . 9/23/2010
This is the first time i'm reading this story and let me just say that I really LOVE it.
Oreo-PeanutButter-Macaroni chapter 17 . 9/18/2010
So basically i love this story and all your stories! i love that you did all the time jumps in this chapter it made it really cute. once again i love this story! it so lucas/peyton! so please keep writing and i will be reading.
oth4eva chapter 17 . 9/6/2010
Loved the story and loved the extract from Lucas' novel at the end :)
PureAngelBloodedWriter chapter 17 . 9/4/2010
Love it
sawyerbrookescott chapter 17 . 9/4/2010
i loved it. i'm sad to see it end... goodluck on your teaching endeavor...i just hope to read more stories from you...soon?
kylielink chapter 17 . 9/4/2010
good last 2 chapters
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