Wow. They seemed like horrible ANBU agents (who wouldn't be able to identify them as obvious as they were) but this was a fun and cute story to read.

Oh this is soooooo cute.

My favorite character here is Tanaka-chan, too!

Oh my gosh! I knew Shinnou was from Bonds! Ha! You're right XD it is the fav movie of all SasuNaru fangirls! mwahahaha! and seriously this was so freaking adorable! especially the endings~ mostly I'd hate people sticking OC's and making them like the the character from the anime/book/game or whatever, but yours totally worked~ and as i said, even if Tanaka did kiss Naru in the end, it's still so freaking cute! You are truly one of the awesomest :D and I so loved imagining the part where Sasuke placed his forehead against Naruto's and then said "I'm here"! I totally fangirled over that! and also where Sasuke grabbed Naruto's reach before he split to investigate! I swear that was another very very cute moment! Gawd I love you so much! You have officially became one of my fav authors! Hoorah!

Aww...cute. )

great story! You gotta love their bickering so cute!

I really love it XD

seriously it was well written and with all the fighting scenes and the characters' behaviour being the same as in the manga I could imagine it watching as anime

sadly I don't think that's gonna happen but anyway

good work

Brilliant! I loved the POV; it was different and provided a whole new perspective on Naruto and Sasuke's relationship. They were both IC and totally believable. I loved that they bickered all the time, but when things got serious they fought perfectly together. The moments they reveal their care for each other-when Sasuke is worried about Naruto going alone to the facility; when Naruto can't find Sasuke during the second fight-are subtle and absolutely perfect.

The plot was good; not too fast or too slow, plenty of action, and your choice of villain was interesting. All in all, a really well-written story.

~ FF

i love this the first time i read it...and love it even more the second time i read it...i wish all sasunaru fictions can be written more like this...

Very good constructed story, with not so usual POV.

You don't find much Naruto original plot stories, and with the civilian as narrator for most of the part (at some point in the fight with the main villain you slipped, through).

However, IMHO I think the title is inadequate to the content and don't invite to read your story. It also is overused in Naruto section.

Also, in the summary you could point the strongness of the story, for which I count the daymio's daughter POV.

The story itself is great!

Loved it! Long time no see you around, miss! I was craving for a fic with Sasuke x Naruto fighting together with their actual overpowered level, and you gave one to me! Thank you!

I'm quite happy for having noticed you were using the Reibi idea in the middle of the story! Ha!

That story was so funny!"Orochimaru man whore clothes" that was hilariousxD

rofl!I love Tanaka! she makes my day!

Awesome story! Completely unexpected at the end. XD

*LOVES*

That was amazing! Super exciting, touching and just completely wonderful! *ADORES*

Great job

Love the character interactions & the storyline.

It was an enjoyable read :)