This made me cry. (And believe me, that's hard to accomplish.) I love your writing style and now I'm off to read the sequel!

V.

A dying!Arthur seriously makes me cry. ;_;

It's just so tragic, you know? Lovely ending, though.

Very nice story (again and again). :)

It's interesting reading this, since I read the second part first. But it's wonderful to know the backstory, and I love the insight into Arthur's mind, as well. Again, I just have to compliment you on the way that your writing flows. It's spectacular, and your characterizations are spot-on. I can't really say much more, other than this is brilliant, and thank you for sharing it. :)

I'm too lazy to sign in, sorry, lol. But I really liked this. It's a multi-layered dream, isn't it? Perhaps I read into it wrong...but then how many layers was it? Eames was Mack, wasn't he? So that's a dream too? Well, even if I happened to have interpreted it wrong, I really liked this. Good job! :)

;-; *puddle of tears* poor arthur

Wow. I don't really know what I can say about this. I actually had tears in my eyes at the end. Again, the relationship between Arthur and Eames is beautiful.

wow! intense, love it though