love it

Aww, this is adorable. Kind of had that angsty feeling in the beginning, but I'm a sucker for a happy ending. I loved the way you stringed the words, but because of that it was definitely worth the read. Awesome story!

I. Loved. This. U r an amazing writer!

it's amazing. you write unbelievable, so good!

really awesome!

This was so deliciously fluffy that I can't stop smiling.

Your writing is excellent as always, and this is definitely going on my favorites list.

:)

So okay. My older brother got married. . . in July of '09 right? And for their first anniversary, he and his wife went to the beach. Now my older brother has hated the beach all of his life pretty much for the same reasons Kendall does. But he went with his wife and they played in the water all day long apparently and it was so romantic even though he only told me about it. Anyway, I was reading this and smiling so hugely because that's all I could think of. Even though that makes no sense because my brother is over 6 feet tall and she's like, 5' 3" lol. Because James is like, 7 feet tall.

OKAY. I'm going to actually talk about the chapter. Your rambling disease has spread to me. Shame.

All I can talk about is the kiss and the end because everything was finally totally and completely okay. Yes. And Kendall was happy and James was happy which means that I am now happy.

So now I'm going to write C17 of 'Innocence Lost'. lol. I was writing it earlier and they boys were watching TV and James and Logan seriously started cuddling and I was like, "GUYS, I'M MISS FENWAY RIGHT NOW SO STOP CUDDLING!" but they wouldn't so I had to stop. Anyway, I feel like I'm going to go back to writing it and they're going to start making out. -headesk-

I'm sorry this review failed but I really really did love this story lots. YES.

Poor James. He's like. . . dying. I want to hug him. Again. lol. Seriously, consider yourself awesome because you have done the impossible. I like Kames. I mean. I LOVE JAGAN WAY MORE but I like Kames. I can easily see why it's such a popular pairing. YES. I love this story though. It makes my heart hurt.

Okay I have to be honest. Alex has been pushing me to read this and I was like, "NOOOOO HAHA I HATE KENDALL (sorry!) AND I WANT JAMES TO BE WITH LOGAN!". But then I did read it and I'm really rea;;y really glad because I actually really loved this and I'm glad I have two more chapters to read because it was pretty fantastic.

James is like, precious in this. I really like it when he's vulnerable and that's not often. I wanted to hug him the entire time I was reading this and I also wanted to punch Kendall for being such an insensitive jerk. But everything was okay in the end. Although there's two more chapers so that can change. I shall go see.

P.S. I giggled when I read that Kendall shared his closet with Logan. -dies- Even though I would rather Logan share a closet with James AND I'M GOING TRO STOP TALKING NOW!

P.P.S. Awwww. I liked the part about Logan caring. -heart-

I'M STOPPING NOW LOL. HERE I GO TO CHAPTER TWO!

This was so precious! Especially that ending. ADORABLE.

Jesus, oh the angst, the pain the longing in both of them oh god I am so wooby now. I will need serious fluffy love after this

Ok I love that you used 11:11 pm which is suppose to be some magical/powerful number time(hence why it's a wish time or some such) it totally helped that i was listening to 11:11 pm by AAR whilst reading this.

Ok the line "trying to buy more time, which he kind of doesn't have the money for". was brilliant. I love the way you write it's like poetry. Beautiful

apologize for the rambling, it's the lack of food.

AWWWW, poor Kendall! :'( But you ended the story perfectly, so it's okay. This chapter was also awesome, by the way. :) ILOVETHISWHOLESTORY.

Apparently, I reviewed Chapter 1 when I meant to review Chapter 3. *sigh* What I was going to say about Chapter 1 was first off: "He had words, laced together into sentences, combed through over and over again to make sure they fit just right, silky smooth, until he was ready to let them out. Feel them swirl up his throat and spill over his tongue, shaping them perfectly so they would come out like velvet." Whatta line! Wow, I love it! XD And that hug was so sweet at the end! I'm very glad you gave it a fluffy-ish ending. :D

This is the sweetest thing EVER! And quite possibly my favorite Kames/Jendall fluff. AWWWWWW, yay for James finally getting his kiss! You made me pity him and Kendall in this. Amazing job! LOVE IT! :D