| Reviews for Vampire Stalker II: Second Blood |
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Guest chapter 1 . 5/29/2017 YURI ON ICE! YURI ON ICE! |
NikDrarrow chapter 2 . 1/19/2015 Awesome story! Loved the first now I can't wait for the next chapter in this! :D You do plan to continue right? Sorry, I just notice that you have updated it in awhile :/ |
hi chapter 2 . 4/15/2013 What going to happen on the next chapter please write more thanks |
TheJokersServant chapter 2 . 2/24/2013 This Is All I Could Think When Ryou Said "Why kill me when there are gallons of blood behind you?": Well they encourage your complete cooperation, Send you roses when they think you need to smile. I can't control myself because I don't know how, And they love me for it honestly, I'll be here for a while. So give them blood, blood, gallons of the stuff! Give them all that they can drink and it will never be enough. So give them blood, blood, blood. Grab a glass because there's going to be a flood! A celebrated man amongst the gurneys. They can fix me proper with a bit of luck. The doctors and the nurses they adore me so, But it's really quite alarming cause I'm such an awful fuck. (Oh thank you!) I gave you blood, blood, gallons of the stuff, I gave you all that you can drink and it has never been enough. I gave you blood, blood, blood, I'm the kind of human wreckage that you love! |
horrorstar100 chapter 2 . 11/19/2012 Please continue. I like it but when does Bakura get to bite Ryou? |
jj chapter 1 . 11/14/2012 ummm how do i say this nicely? oh yeah "Get your laszy butt in gear and write another chapter! huh please " |
Celestialfae chapter 1 . 9/6/2012 Need to add a sequel somewhere in my favorites otherwise it just doesnt add up. |
PhoenixPower96 chapter 1 . 12/21/2011 I just want to say that I loved VS and if you continue to write this one I would be ecstatic. I love the storyline no matter how cliche or Twlight-y it may be. Don't listen to the people who say this story isn't good. It is and I'm sure many people love it. I know I do. I just have one question: Who is going to be the main couple in the story? Please write more! XXCrazyWriter96XX |
Leviathan of the Sea chapter 1 . 5/29/2011 I think u should continue this. I would really like to know how it goes. |
Daisuke Uchiha chapter 1 . 5/27/2011 Awwwww! How cute! You have to update this! I loooooooooved VS when I first read it. It's my favorite JoeyxSeto fic out of all the ones I've read,swear on my son. XD and Bakura is gonna be receiving mushiness,too,so he should be talkin' like that! Lol. Pleeeeeeeeeese update! |
Shadow fairy princess chapter 1 . 1/29/2011 how plz update the story plz. I want 2 know what a hppends and when Bakura meets Ryou plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz update the chapeter can't wait 2 know what hgappends |
Ryou Bakura chapter 1 . 10/19/2010 Um...uh...it's a wonderful fanfic I have to say. I mean, this is a very interesting idea, turning various characters into vampires and writing about their interactions. But...um...I do not want to seem like a whiner but...well...it's hard enough sharing my body with an unbalanced...a very opinionated...a psychotic killing machine but to know full well a wide variety of horrible events are bound to befall my person and I will probably be turned into a vampire in order to satisfy my vampiric lover that is based off this darker half currently residing in my body scares me. Have I offended you in any way? I'm sorry if I have. Please do not hate me! In addition, I do not want to be a burden but...um...I'm not even mentioned within this chapter. It was all about Yami and Yugi. You said this was going to be a fic where- Yami Bakura finally enacts his revenge upon the filthy Pharaoh and his useless twit of a host, using his superior vampiric wiles to wreak havoc upon those unsuspecting fools. It's obvious that I...I mean, he is the better of the three vampires. The other two are deadweight (no pun intended). Honestly, why even bother writing the other two into the story at all? I'm sure I speak for everyone when I say that it would be best for you to write them out and focus solely on- I'm sorry pressing business! I must go! Keep up the good work...bye! |
cutepiku chapter 1 . 9/2/2010 Like many others, I found you through Bennett the Sage. However, I'm not here to flame you. I'm not a Yu-gi-oh fan. I like the abridged series. I am an anime fan, and I recently started to enjoy yaoi. The flamers are clearly people who have no been apart of anime fandoms. They also strike me as young and immature. Don't respond to them. You can easily weed out the BtS flamers from ordinary flamers. Just ignore them. They bash you to make themselves feel high and mighty. Fandoms and fanfics are not always about being written amazingly. It's about enjoying yourself. As long as people are enjoying the cutesy plots, cliche or not, people will write. So I commend you on continuing, despite your sudden rush of flamers. Carry on with you fandom. Write what you want to write, and share it with others who can appreciate and enjoy. |
Hullaboola chapter 1 . 9/1/2010 /bt/the-sage/fanfic-theatre/27667-sagevampire-stalker-part2 |
SweetSunshine chapter 1 . 8/16/2010 I have been wanting to ask you a question and now seems a good of time as any: have you ever been in love before? I'm not trying to make fun of you but it seems to me that you don't really know how to write romance very well. I think that's one of the reasons your story suffers so much. You don't seem to grasp how real relationships work. It takes time and effort for people to love one another. You seem to rush through it. I think you may want to try praticing writing romance before posting your story. If you did that, then maybe people would enjoy your stories more. I hope that helps, SweetSunshine |