ok not that this is'nt good but what's with the japanese and 1 year olds can't speak coherntly (sp?) in fact they barly speak at all except for saying mama or dada so yeah just fix that and your good.

I LOVE IT that is all I can say is I LOVE IT

There were a few errors here and there. Plus, I feel like you used WAY to many exclamation marks. Or maybe it's just me lol. To me it made it look like they just yelled everthing and it kinda annoyed me. Other than that it's a good story :)

Aw, this story was so cute! That lady needs to get her butt kicked for taking that poor child away!

I'm gonna die what happened to sweet noah

I LOVE THIS STORY! ITS SO YAOI AND KAWAII! Its also family like IM GONNA KILL THE FRICKIN OFFICERS THAT TOOK NOAH AWAY!

Where do I start? Well, I like the plot (alot) but there are alot of errors. You need to spellcheck your stories, there are tons of misspellings. Also there are typos like "Nero flinched at the sudden nose at the front door," 'nose; should be 'noise.' To make your story "flow" better, I would conjoin some sentences that can be conjoined or seperate run on sentences. Last thing, try and not use their names so much. Like instead of useing "Dante" or "Nero" about 50 times, say "the older half demon" or "the yonger demon slayer," ect. This is just my personal advice, so you do not have to use it if you don't want to, but I hope it helps.)

I like the story line, however, i found it hard to get into at first, the grammar and spelling needs to be reviewed.

Great story though! Keep up the good work! There isn't enough of Dante/Nero slash fics around _

9 inches lol q mal! jajaja! It was good an I'm looking 4ward the 2nd part of this fic! I'm dying 2 read! X3

WOW! that was so good! it keept me to the edge of my seat! (see I told u I would review XP) CAN WAIT 2 KEEP reading awesome work!

LOOOOOVE IT!

Cant wait fer moar! awesome story!

Hey Sakura-Chan! Great that you wrote the 2nd chapter; sorry if i wasnt much help when you asked for ideas, but i think this story turned out really well anyway.

This chapter was quite emotinal, it's been written really well. I enjoyed reading, but it would be awesome if you could write a pairing that I really liked! XD Not that I can really think of anything now i'm not into anything at the moment other than Fable... Anways, keep up the great work!

UUUUUUUUUU! Higschool! And perverted boys! OwO Likes very much!

Hope you post it soon

fail at the end it fucking lady dammit get it right.

and i cant wait to see how he survives also with the guy he might fall for *coughcough* make him have black hair cause it would be ht opposite of Nero and Dante.

make his best friend be a girl and like magic powers and crap u cant let him have a normal high-school experience.

LOVE~

lady