What? None of the end made any sense at all

Whyyyyyyy? O Why did you stop writing thiiiis? Why why why? *tearing my hairs and wailing to the sky

Omg first story i have read where mc is dudley with magic i love it

I'm sorry author, but I can't keep reading this. Your Dudley is just way too temperamental for my tastes. He keeps going into a fit of rage without any regard to his surroundings or the people around him, and he never apologizes for his hot temper. And though I like that you try to make Dudley smart, he never seems to really think about his actions and their consequences. He might have excellent grades at Hogwarts and be a genuis at charms, but all that doesn't really matter too much when he can't even keep his head cool while he's talking to others. I've seen how to link a lot of Dudley's anger issues to how he feels like everyone else takes his control away from him, but it's not as much as them talking his control away, than him not being able to have any self-control to begin with.

I really liked the primise of your story, but I don't like to read about too temperamental characters too much. I'm also not really a huge fan of how you incorporate his past life into the story, with how he was a cool-headed scientist to start with, but suddenly basically a God (when he was posessed), and now a temperamental youth with anger issues.

I'm sorry, but I'll drop your story here. Have a nice day regardless.

i thought i was reading hp, idk what yhe fuck im reading in this chapter. it was good while it lasted though. thanks for the effort

The story seemed interesting but I really can't be bothered with the OC's ''past'' and you're just using flashbacks as filler to explain his magic plus making him angry 4theplot..

plus doc crow is obviously going to double cross the MC and/or experiment on him. srsly, he's like the only recurrent OC who can do anything villany

Oh how i wish this story was canon! It's a perfect example of how knowing the future may make thing for the worst instead of the better! I just love this story! It is so original and realistis so good job for writing such a wonderful fanfiction!

One of the worst plans ever 1 get money, don't think of using you magic in a way you can get it 2 get into hogwarts for no reason other than you've got no life and you can do magic 3 be emotional when being compared to Dudley by a ten year old child 4 your a pathetic piece of shit who want to stay under the radar even though all you talk about is magic and shit like that and don't know the word subtlety

I CANT DO THIS
Its been YEARS since the last update
*darkens in a corner*
im going to casually make poisonous mushroom soup

I think your SI is absolutely brilliant. The note that Dudley left to his parents made me choke in laughter.

Am I Nicholas Larkin?
I love the last sentence of this chapter!
Lovely fic. Update soon?

Honestly, this has to be one of the most creative SI HP story I've ever read. Especially when authors reincarnate their OCs into actual characters of the HP world, they usually go for the good guys or the notorious ones, never the unexpected one such as Dudley. I have to say I like HP a lot better with this sneaky, protective, loyal, magical Dudley. I can't wait to read the rest of your other chapters for this story.

It is so very sad that you abandoned this story... It is really great. The grammar is a bit off at times, but the plot is complex and intriguing, the world building is fantastic, and the characters are complex and compelling without your falling into the trap of changing canon personalities for no reason. All around this is a pretty damn good story. Not on par with the absolute best, but that is just because your style is very direct and simple. If I had to rank it out of ten, I would definitely call this a nine.

sure someone already posted this, but Dudley was a year older than Harry

now it's just too complicated and annoying to read so bye