I feel so bad for Ratchet.

interesting

I like this. Mostly the first chapter since Optimus is my favorite character and Ironhide and Ratchet are my second. I like the first chapter, and hope you can do more concerning these 2 or 3 charaters.

This is great!

Prowler *Snicker* Prowler Prowler. Every time one of the bots said that, I laughed. Still, poor Prowl. This is funny, but with a really good storyline.

*shakes head* tsk tsk.

What those mechs get into without their femmes there to keep them sane...

That Optimus would be so devious with using the ship-wide loudspeaker had me rolling laughing.

... and poor Prowl! ROFL Who'da thunk that PRIME would have been in the instigator in that little prank?

Your humor was spot on perfect. I loved it!

This story is extremely captivating. Optimus and Ironhide was hilarious, but Prowl's past was emotional. I would definitely like to read more.

If i squee loud enough, will there be more?

SO SAD! I love this take on Prowl/Bluestreak's story. I mean, using the scraplets was a very nice, and smooth way to introduce the new fandom of Prime into the already heavily established TFverses. Not only that, but it was a fantastic mini arc that explains so much.

I feel very bad for Prowl and for Bluestreak in this fic, but right there at the very end, you made me feel far worse for Jazz than for anyone else.

LMAO! I totally saw my brother and I in that, and that's scary! This was a fun expert from everyday life aboard the starborne ship. Fun, and relieving as the two get to let out some of their pent up frustrations.

Something other than Prowl/Jazz! I prefer both, but this is definitely fresh D Good job!

This was lovely, and both light hearted and fun, but also profound and sad. Thanks for writing it :)

*gives a Buddha smile* Well done.

Prowl and Jazz always made a great mutt-and-jeff team. Seeing them together makes me smile. Thinking of how Prowl will react to Jazz's death ends it, though. At the very least, he will want to visit Mission City, to see where it happened for himself. And he'll get just that much more... remote.

You had Sideswipe- is Sunstreaker with them at this time? Probably, given the time frame, but only you can say for sure. I hope so. Sides without Sunny is a little scary, like a poorly balanced blade.

And Bluestreak- he's related to Prowl? Mr Silence and the Motormouth? Well, I can see it, I've got cousins that no one believes are related to me. And bringing Mirage in for the SAR is a nice touch.

And now I'm thinking about tri-d chess, but with hexagons rather than squares. Hmm... *strokes my beard*

Damn, Praxus' fate is still haunting there. Nightbeat, good use of him there. poor Prowl. :( I like him and Jazz like that, on opposite sides yet close.

Oh wow, the whole backstory bit made me so sad but I'm so glad those two have each other for friends.