OMG...want to write a longer review but at the moment I am just in stunned amazement of your fic. Karl-centric and a likeable/believeable OC who adds to the story!

I love the open ending with Diablo...and I really hope the Tiger makes its way back to Karl...

I also love this line so much; The Diablo Tiger had pulled itself from the chasms of hell itself to take one last life.

And I am 100% with you on your conspiracy theories. As soon as you were writing about the Ultimate X projects and Thomas making Karl a pilot I was like omg...is Bit Cloud related to Karl?!

Thanks again for writing this amazing story!

Cute fic, I loved it!

I love it! this has been the best zoids fic I ever read

Wow! I just got done reading this and I must say, that it's one of the best Zoids fics I've read in quite some time. It's more recent than a lot of stuff in this category, so it's good to see people still interested in Zoids.

Now, onto actual feedback about your writing. :P Characterization was perfect, plot was good, did not expect Ralph in there, and although logic would say to expect it, it's actually incredibly hard to find a story that is formatted well and grammatically correct.

I was extremely pleased with Serentiy. I was a bit skeptical in the beginning because I normally avoid stories where an original character plays an important role, but you kept her realistic, and the focus on Karl, where it belonged.

Yes, I agree with you that most sequels are the forced, bastard children that never come anywhere close to the original, but I have confidence that if you do write a sequel, your skill and originality will keep it just as enjoyable as this, so please consider it. I have no issues with a 40 year old Karl. :)

well first i'd better thank you, loved the story! i was glued to it. i love karl he makes a great subject for a spin off story because alot has been let to the imagination. you stayed close to what i think is his true nature which was great, i hate when a character is ruined for me by changing the fundamentals of their personality. the plot was very true to zoids and there theme of "it's far fetched but not too far fetched" lol. i think that your knowledge showed that you really have an evident passion and talent and i applause you for it. all in all i think they should recruit you for more zoids chaotic century episodes there were definately too few. :)

lmao! I bet that was half the hospital peeking in on them.

I like your followup with the cores. It's good that Thomas gets to work on something so major. And I like how the Diablo survived.

A Sequel would be nice, but I see where you're coming from. Traveling wouldn't be very interesting (unless you had things happen or a visit from the Diablo, etc.) and the development of the Zoids could be nice. But would focus more on Thomas, I would think.

Regardless, this was an excellent read. I'm happy to include it in my favorites.

Wow. You had me going on these. I felt pretty sure Karl would be alive. Thomas, I wasn't so sure. And I didn't think Serenity would make it. Glad to see I was wrong on all accounts. Really good fight scenes.

lol. I love how he just says something and the system picks up on it. It seems the Zoids didn't want Ralph to get in and ignored Karl. But who is the other secondary pilot?

Wow. You put a lot of work into the X. I'm impressed.

:o

It doesn't respond to his voice commands? Odd. Perhaps this is where the coded notebook comes into play?

You don't do anything halfway, do you? You're doing an incredible job of this. Although there's still so many questions, I have to wonder how it will be wrapped up in 3 chapters.

Gah! Guess you weren't kidding when you sasid cliffhanger cascade. Just how many Bionoids (my new word for a man made Organoid) were there? There's more questions than answers in this chapter.

Interesting. 2 new Ligers and those unmanned Zoids are emitting unique signals. Signals only the Diablo and base can see... After this, I'm starting to think that the Diablo was developed for good, to wipe out those unmanned and that freaky Organoid like thing. But something happened with distress signals and causes it to go berserk... Must read more... :D

What. The. Hell. Is. It? Some freaky alien or an illusion gifted AI-enhanced Organoid? Whatever it is, it kills fast.

Unmanned zoids coming after you? Not good. Even as skilled as she is, those odds aren't very good.

Interesting. Zoid assassin or coward hunter? Although it doesn't look like it really needs the guns much. Climate control like that would be awesome. I really need to use more voice commands on my computer. Thanks for bringing that back up as an option to me, lol :)

3D Coordinates, eh? Makes sense. And just what will be find there? Secrets of the universe? A father's past shrouded in mystery?

:( Poor Serenity. And Karl.

:O Irvine would probably faint if he saw that much money being offered. And I'm not certain he wouldn't do it either, lol.

Wow. This one was a really good chapter. Poor Thomas. Their father... lot of mystery going on here. 3 sets of 3 numbers? You've got me sitting here, trying to figure out what it could be.

"she might glen information from the engineers" glen should be glean