It's short, as you said, but very good. So much suspense, it's insane! Update soon please?

First of all, I like the title of this fic, it has a neat ring to it.

Second of all, I am confused, and that is a good thing. A decent story should always allow the reader the oppurunity to be confused, and to mull over the circumstances, you do this nicely.

Interested to see where this goes.

A rather confusing story, however interesting, nonetheless.

The summary made me think of RE: Revelations straight away!

Keep up the good work!

I like this story I want to know why Chris and Jill don't like each other.

This is a very interesting start (albeit confusing as you've said xD)

I liked how you were trying to sort of...present your theory on RE:Revelations with this, but I have to say this story taking in all sorts of elements is very interesting. I know I'd like to find out why Chris and Jill suddenly don't like each other! Good job :)