GODDAMN BLOODY HELL! YOU COULDN'T HAVE HAD HERMIONE CATCH SOME GODFORSAKEN SICKNESS LIKE STREP THROAT! YOU JUST HADTO, JUST HAD TO MAKE HER LOSE HER LEGS! NOW I HATE THIS GODDAMN STORY!

Your stories are great

I think you made a mistake, you said that the dark creatures went after harry but he beat them with karate chop and kick. You said these dark creatures were goblins, trolls, demons, dementors, chimeras, manticores, and dragons.

htis si vrery very good. i loved it

the use of random exclamation points during high tension moments is a bit juvenille, and also reminiscent of the pokemon game boy games. you know, like, 'and suddenly a wild snorlax appeared!'. switch snorlax with harry potter and you have the format for a lot of your action scenes. not a great effect.

seems good so far.

great story hope you update soon can't wait for you to update please update soon

This was a very nice story. I enjoyed it.

haha i love how even after years of not being on fanfiction, i still remember this story and i still love it.

a good read

now I'll go see if that website is up.

Awesome once again! I love your stories! Please keep writing more!

amazing amazing

all your books is amazing this book was sow good that i read it 5 times its so good i cant say how good this book is amazing hope youll write more!.

That was Absolutely awesome! I loved the bible verses and the allegorical plot altogehter! Well written, I wish i could wirte like that!

I won't say any names but i think i have somewhat of an idea about the rider on a stag.

i loved this story! it was really cool. however, chapters 14 & 15 were both cut off (im not sure if it was my computer's fault or the website's) so i was hoping you could email those chapters to me. thank you so much! great job with the story!