| Reviews for Aleu: wolf pack leader |
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   HardyFanGirl20 chapter 6 . 6/18/2018 More |
| joshua chapter 11 . 10/3/2017 damn it i was really liking this story and the new isnt any better i read it and theres no 12th chapter |
| Timon64 chapter 11 . 9/15/2011 Aww rewrite? But this story was going so great already! Alright then if you think that this is a good choice then I'm behind ya 100 percent! |
| Timon64 chapter 5 . 9/14/2011 I'm really liking this fic! Very believable story! |
| Timon64 chapter 1 . 9/14/2011 Nice start! Let's see how the rest of this story unfolds. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 6/26/2011 This is terrible! Everyone with a brain knows that wolves, even when full grown can't catch full gown deer! Thats why they have PACKS! They can't eat 6 caribou, they would need a huge pack of wolves. And wolves usually stay in packs of 8-12 so you can't make up a pack of 30, they would never survive! Wolves work as a PACK to bring down a single some books and understand wolves before you write a story, make it realistic. You need to work on your spelling and grammer...it is awful, get a beta. I can't believe that you don't even know simple capitalization. Another thing Aleu isn't half wolf, only 25% because her father is half wolf, then had pups with a dog making the pups 75% siberian husky and 25% wolf. And finally, wolves have a natural insttinct to hunt and that does not make then hold back other deer while others kill. Get it right next time you make a story. |
| HalfMaskedWholeHeart chapter 2 . 6/24/2011 Luv it! my favorite animal is a wolf! so this is like my favorite animal fanfiction |
| The Duelist's Heiress chapter 1 . 6/10/2011 This is cute! TDH |
| Jackson chapter 1 . 4/23/2011 I love reading fan fiction, thus, I do read a lot of it. After reading this piece of work I have come to the conclusion that it was a very enjoyable and well set out story line. I especially admire the fact that you have referenced back to the previous film for vital and very useful information. That was clever of you to do. Also, I see that you have tried to use your knowledge of Balto to make up characters less. I will now offer some correction to guide you: do to the ice forming to make a bridge- DUE I do except criticism-ACCEPT He couldn't of made it to the other side-COULDN'T HAVE 2 outsider wolves- numbers below ten are written in letters. All in all this was a very interesting story to read, it was a great follow on and you have clearly given this great thought. A very good and worth while fan fiction. Very well done. JACKSON... |
| chaosblast321 chapter 10 . 3/18/2011 Nice job but you might want to put events are after balto 3 other than that overall good job need more keep I'm coming |
| Grey Daughter chapter 10 . 1/11/2011 Apenas tome cuidado com as reações humanas, porque lobos não coram! E sei lá, talvez capítulos maiores? |
| Autobot Lancewing Beta 06 chapter 2 . 11/21/2010 Balto returns? Nice! |
| Autobot Lancewing Beta 06 chapter 7 . 11/14/2010 Lancewing: I'm guessing that Niju returns. Great story. Can't wait for more... |
| Silwer-Paw chapter 5 . 8/19/2010 Youre getting better, ans the story itself progress nicely. |
| Silwer-Paw chapter 1 . 8/16/2010 Well, im goin to be honest. Theres few lines without some sort of spelling/grammar mistake... If you seek to become a writer, I suggest you read up on your grammar. Not trying to be mean, just trying to help. |
