Reviews for We'll Be A Dream
I.Am.Not.You.I.Am.Me chapter 6 . 9/3/2011
Love this story please continue it and update soon :D
moonluver92 chapter 6 . 5/10/2011
i loved this i just started reading your stuff..this is the first one though but im preety sure the rest are just as good...i love the song u used it was myfirst time listening to the song and i've replayed it like 6 times already...ur an awesome writer cam\nt wait til u finish it...adding u too my fave authors!
Neko the kawatta cat chapter 6 . 4/24/2011
UPDATE! OwO
BananaphoneBob chapter 6 . 4/21/2011
WOW! I love this story! I'd never listened to most of the songs before, and when I did, they were really good! Then I read this chapter and saw 'Get It Right' and squealed :D I LOVE that song so much! -cough- back to the story ... I can't believe Karin did that to Sakura! Grrrrr. But, Sasuke came, and it was cute, so I don't mind :D I can't wait for more!

-x-Emma-x-
The 8th Stone chapter 1 . 4/21/2011
At first when I saw the summary, I thought, "Interesting idea. Plot and grammar probably sucks, though," but clicked into it nevertheless. Now I'm reserving judgment.

-Grammar and spelling: Good so far. Though the usage of swears can be toned down a little. There are minor mistakes too. For example, the sentence: "'...one condition...' Sasuke paused, his father giving him a questioning look as Sasuke began walking from the office." needs to be changed into "'...one condition...' Sasuke paused. His father gave him a questioning look as the boy [or just Sasuke, but "the boy" avoids repetition] walked out the office." Mistakes like this can be avoided by going back & looking through the story and/or getting a beta.

-Story structure and plot: This is still the first chapter, but the whole thing looks pretty good if the rest is as good as this chapter. The idea is certainly interesting.

-Character: Sasuke's thought process on the Going-To-A-Music-Academy thing is a little abrupt. It looked as if it took him a few minutes to decide on everything. If you want to make the conflict as problematic as it is, don't skip over things like this.

-Summary: Delete the extra "not like HSM" thing and put it in the author notes or something. Summaries are summaries. Things like these are not necessary.

That's probably it. The story is fine, just fix up some mistakes and it'll be perfect.
Sweet Devil112816 chapter 5 . 12/9/2010
lol sasuke called sakura cute. please continue this story. its really good so far.
WiinterAngEl chapter 5 . 11/2/2010
ii likk daa storyy,,,ii liik daa endinnq of diz chapter...buut didd youu continuee da storyy? cuz iKant findd any other chapers.
KoHaNa-ChAn20 chapter 1 . 10/23/2010
:D the way you write, its amazing.

The characters are decent (not speaking attitude wise- there's nothing decent with fighting a drunken man whose just stabbed you. Or getting arrested. -snickers- Go sasuke!), your piece of music can really match the atmosphere. I mean, up till now i'm still listening to that 'Catch Me' by Demi Lovato :S

But anyway, nuff said:

You're really skilled ! Keep up the good work x)

*thumbs up*
ABloomingFlower chapter 2 . 10/13/2010
This is so cool.
ABloomingFlower chapter 1 . 10/13/2010
LOve it.
Neko the kawatta cat chapter 5 . 10/11/2010
Update! This is so great! OwO You rock! OwO
raven rose 101 chapter 5 . 10/11/2010
Update soon
Neko the kawatta cat chapter 4 . 8/31/2010
aww i love it! 3
Unfortunate Events chapter 1 . 8/29/2010
Ooh.

What a temper Sasuke has.

I love this so far, and it's only the beginning!

I can't wait to see what way you finish this, and how Sakura ties into it.

:D

Music!

Yay.

And, haha. 'NOT LIKE HSM.'
raven rose 101 chapter 4 . 8/28/2010
Wow. This is so amazing.
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